May 4, 2026
Today, my plans were a lot but different than usual. I started my listening session after I woke up at 5:50 AM. At the start , I was afraid but after I began I felt comfortable and relaxed. After that, I had breakfast, got changed, and went to school. At school, I played basketball in the gym and didn’t study much during classes. Lastly, I went back home, ate lunch then start my writing session. I practise listening, writing, and speaking every day to improve my English. This is because we often get many written assignments to do at school or at work - in order to be able to write correctly and efficiently we have to practice. Finally, I’ll train volleyball after I do track walking. In conclusion, learning skills and training sports are necessary to enjoy our time and to be healthy and energetic.
Today, my plans were a lot was busy but different than usual.
Today was busy but different than usual.
At the start , I was afraid, but after I began I felt comfortable and relaxed. At the start , I was afraid, but after I began I felt comfortable and relaxed.
At school, I played basketball in the gym and didn’t study much during my classes. At school, I played basketball in the gym and didn’t study much during my classes.
Lastly, I went back home, ate lunch and then started my writing session. Lastly, I went back home, ate lunch and then started my writing session.
I practisce listening, writing, and speaking every day to improve my English.
I practice listening, writing, and speaking every day to improve my English.
This is because we often get many written assignments to do at school or at work -and in order to be able to write correctly and efficiently, we have to practice.
This is because we often get written assignments to do at school or at work and in order to write correctly and efficiently, we have to practice.
Finally, I’ll trainplay volleyball after I do track walkingwalk some laps on the track.
Finally, I’ll play volleyball after I walk some laps on the track.
You could also say "train for volleyball" if it's about practicing. Play volleyball is more leisurely.
In conclusion, learning skills and training for sports are necessary to enjoy our time and to be healthy and energetic. In conclusion, learning skills and training for sports are necessary to enjoy our time and to be healthy and energetic.
Your paragraph started off with "my day was different than usual" so your conclusion should close this introduction.
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Today, my plans were a lot but different than usual.MY GUESS: Unlike most usual days, today I had many plans.
私の予想:普段とは違って、今日は予定がたくさんあった。
MY GUESS: Unlike most usual days, today I had many plans.
私の予想:普段とは違って、今日は予定がたくさんあった。
I started my English listening session after I wokewaking up at 5:50 AM.
I started my English listening session after waking up at 5:50 AM.
SUGGESTION: Avoid repeating the word "I" twice in the same sentence when writing. (This is no problem when speaking, but written and spoken and written differ slightly.) アドバイス:文章を書く際は、同じ文の中で「私」という単語を2回繰り返さないようにしましょう。(話す分には問題ありませんが、書き言葉と話し言葉では少しニュアンスが異なります。)
At the start first, I was afraid but after I began Igradually came to felt comfortable and relaxed. (最初は怖かったけれど、次第に落ち着いてリラックスできるようになった。)
At first, I was afraid but gradually came to felt comfortable and relaxed. (最初は怖かったけれど、次第に落ち着いてリラックスできるようになった。)
After that, I had breakfast, got changed, and went to school.
At school, I played basketball in the gym and didn’t study much during classes.
Lastly, I went back home, ate lunch then start my writing session.
I practise listening, writing, and speaking every day to improve my English.
This is because wWe often get many written assignments (to do at school or at work - in order to be ablehome). It seems that to learn to write correctly and efficiently we have to practice, lots of practice is needed.
We often get many written assignments (to do at school or at home). It seems that to learn to write correctly and efficiently, lots of practice is needed.
私たちはよく(学校や家でやる)書き物の課題をたくさん出されます。正しく効率的に書くことを身につけるには、たくさんの練習が必要のようです。
[MEANING UNKNOWN] MY GUESS: Finally, I’ll tprainctice volleyball after I do trackdoing some practice "fast walking."
[MEANING UNKNOWN] MY GUESS: Finally, I’ll practice volleyball after doing some practice "fast walking."
In conclusion, learning skills and training sports are necessary to enjoy our time and to be healthy and energetic[MEANING UNKNOWN] MY GUESS: It seems a sound body and sound mind are necessary to be succeed in life.
[MEANING UNKNOWN] MY GUESS: It seems a sound body and sound mind are necessary to be succeed in life.
私の推測:人生で成功するには、健全な体と健全な心が必要だと思われる。
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Today, my plans were a lot but different than usual.
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I started my listening session after I woke up at 5:50 AM.
I started my English listening session after SUGGESTION: Avoid repeating the word "I" twice in the same sentence when writing. (This is no problem when speaking, but written and spoken and written differ slightly.) アドバイス:文章を書く際は、同じ文の中で「私」という単語を2回繰り返さないようにしましょう。(話す分には問題ありませんが、書き言葉と話し言葉では少しニュアンスが異なります。) |
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At the start , I was afraid but after I began I felt comfortable and relaxed.
At At the start , I was afraid, but after I began I felt comfortable and relaxed. At the start , I was afraid, but after I began I felt comfortable and relaxed. |
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After that, I had breakfast, got changed, and went to school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At school, I played basketball in the gym and didn’t study much during classes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! At school, I played basketball in the gym and didn’t study much during my classes. At school, I played basketball in the gym and didn’t study much during my classes. |
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Lastly, I went back home, ate lunch then start my writing session. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Lastly, I went back home, ate lunch and then started my writing session. Lastly, I went back home, ate lunch and then started my writing session. |
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I practise listening, writing, and speaking every day to improve my English. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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This is because we often get many written assignments to do at school or at work - in order to be able to write correctly and efficiently we have to practice.
私たちはよく(学校や家でやる)書き物の課題をたくさん出されます。正しく効率的に書くことを身につけるには、たくさんの練習が必要のようです。
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Finally, I’ll train volleyball after I do track walking.
[MEANING UNKNOWN] MY GUESS: Finally, I’ll
Finally, I’ll You could also say "train for volleyball" if it's about practicing. Play volleyball is more leisurely. |
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In conclusion, learning skills and training sports are necessary to enjoy our time and to be healthy and energetic.
私の推測:人生で成功するには、健全な体と健全な心が必要だと思われる。 In conclusion, learning skills and training for sports are necessary to enjoy our time and to be healthy and energetic. In conclusion, learning skills and training for sports are necessary to enjoy our time and to be healthy and energetic. Your paragraph started off with "my day was different than usual" so your conclusion should close this introduction. |
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