May 13, 2025
Pushing Iron Hoops
When I was a child, buckets that were used by villagers were made of wood.
To bind the wooden boards together, at least three iron hoops were put on the top, middle and bottom of the buckets.
After using the buckets for a long time, the wooden boards would wear out and only the iron hoops would be left.
The iron hoops would become children’s toys. To play with the hoop, children would find a piece of hard wire and bend one end of the wire into a hook.
When playing the game, children set the hoop upright and pushed it with the hook of the wire.
They would try to push the hoops as far as they could without them falling down.
When I was a child, buckets that were used by villagers were made of wood.
Could add "the" to "buckets" ("the buckets"), and then remove "that were", depending on the meaning.
To bind the wooden boards together, at least three iron hoops were put on the top, middle and bottom of the buckets.
After using the buckets for a long time, the wooden boards would wear out and only the iron hoops would be left.
The iron hoops would become children’s toys.
If you are referring to specific children in the past, it might be better to specify "the children's toys". If you just mean in general children toys, what you have is fine.
To play with the hoop, children would find a piece of hard wire and bend one end of the wire into a hook.
Similarly to the previous sentence, you may need to add "the" to "children" ("the children") if you are talking about the children in the past doing this specifically.
When playing the game, the children would set the hoop upright and pushed it with the hook of the wire.
I added "would" since you used "would in the previous sentence". You could also say "wire's hook" instead of "hook of the wire".
May 13, 2025
Thank you very much.
Pushing Iron Hoops
When I was a child, buckets that were used by villagers were made of wood.
To bind the wooden boards together, at least three iron hoops were put on the top, middle and bottom of the buckets.
After using the buckets for a long time, the wooden boards would wear out and only the iron hoops would be left.
The iron hoops would become children’s toys.
To play with the hoop, children would find a piece of hard wire and bend one end of the wire into a hook.
When playing the game, children set the hoop upright and pushed it with the hook of the wire.
They would try to push the hoops as far as they could without them falling down.
May 13, 2025
Thank you very much.
Pushing Iron Hoops
When I was a child, buckets that were used by villagers were made of wood.
To bind the wooden boards together, at least three iron hoops were put on the top, middle and bottom of the buckets.
After using the buckets for a long time, the wooden boards would wear out and only the iron hoops would be left.
The iron hoops would become children’s toys.
To play with the hoop, children would find a piece of hard wire and bend one end of the wire into a hook.
When playing the game, children set the hoop upright and pushed it with the hook of the wire.
They would try to push the hoops as far as they could without them falling down.
May 13, 2025
Thank you very much.
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When I was a child, buckets that were used by villagers were made of wood. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! When I was a child, buckets that were used by villagers were made of wood. Could add "the" to "buckets" ("the buckets"), and then remove "that were", depending on the meaning. |
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To bind the wooden boards together, at least three iron hoops were put on the top, middle and bottom of the buckets. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After using the buckets for a long time, the wooden boards would wear out and only the iron hoops would be left. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The iron hoops would become children’s toys. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! The iron hoops would become children’s toys. If you are referring to specific children in the past, it might be better to specify "the children's toys". If you just mean in general children toys, what you have is fine. |
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To play with the hoop, children would find a piece of hard wire and bend one end of the wire into a hook. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! To play with the hoop, children would find a piece of hard wire and bend one end of the wire into a hook. Similarly to the previous sentence, you may need to add "the" to "children" ("the children") if you are talking about the children in the past doing this specifically. |
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When playing the game, children set the hoop upright and pushed it with the hook of the wire. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! When playing the game, the children would set the hoop upright and push I added "would" since you used "would in the previous sentence". You could also say "wire's hook" instead of "hook of the wire". |
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They would try to push the hoops as far as they could without them falling down. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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