July 22, 2023
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Cicadas are not pests, they are just insects. I think they are beneficial insects because they are a kind of Chinese traditional medicine and also a delicious food in China.
A new cicada was born like this: At night, it climbs out of the ground in the woods and climbs up the trunks of the trees. It sheds its shell there and becomes a new baby cicada. The shell is a kind of Chinese traditional medicine, which is said to cure dizziness. The new baby cicada is a type of Chinese food which is considered to be nutritious and full of intense protein.
There are many cicadas in the countryside, so people don't treat them as pets. After children catch cicadas, they typically feed their ducks with the cicadas.
We wouldn't normally compete with other children in catching cicadas, but we did sometimes say something like "how many cicadas do you catch today?" Or "xx caught the most cicadas today."
Cicadas are not pests, t. They are just insects.
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It sheds its shell there and becomes a new baby cicada.
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After children catch cicadas, they typically feed their ducks with the cicadas.
We wouldn't normally compete with other children in catching cicadas, but we did sometimes say something like "h"How many cicadas doid you catch today?"
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OWe wouldn't normally compete with other children in catching cicadas, but we did sometimes say "How many cicadas did you catch today?" or "xx caught the most cicadas today."
This is written better as one sentence because it is one cohesive thought.
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Good job! Cicadas are pretty cool :)
July 22, 2023
Thank you very much. You corrections are very concise.
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Cicadas are not pests, they are just insects. Cicadas are not pests A comma can't be used between two independent sentences. |
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I think they are beneficial insects because they are a kind of Chinese traditional medicine and also a delicious food in China. I think they are beneficial insects because they are |
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A new cicada was born like this: At night, it climbs out of the ground in the woods and climbs up the trunks of the trees. A new cicada |
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It sheds its shell there and becomes a new baby cicada. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The shell is a kind of Chinese traditional medicine, which is said to cure dizziness. The shell is |
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The new baby cicada is a type of Chinese food which is considered to be nutritious and full of intense protein.
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There are many cicadas in the countryside, so people don't treat them as pets. There are many cicadas in the countryside, |
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After children catch cicadas, they typically feed their ducks with the cicadas. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We wouldn't normally compete with other children in catching cicadas, but we did sometimes say something like "how many cicadas do you catch today?" We wouldn't normally compete with other children in catching cicadas, but we did sometimes say do -> did in the past tense |
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Or "xx caught the most cicadas today."
This is written better as one sentence because it is one cohesive thought. |
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