March 30, 2021
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Talent is the key to implement rural vitalization strategy, and new-type professional farmers are one of the important forces. These"new farmers" who have knowledge, technology, good management and management skills shed sweat, become the pioneers of the new business form and the leaders of developing agriculture through science and technology, thus driving farmers around to increase their incomes and become rich.
Practice
Talent is the key to implementing rural vitalization strategyies, and new-type professional farmers are one of the important forcesplay an essential role.
"Play an essential role" is a collocation meaning that these formers are a particularly important part of these strategies.
These" new farmers" who have the knowledge, technology, good management and management skills shed sweat,needed become the pioneers of the new business form and. Thus, they leaders of the developingment of agriculture through science and technology, thus driving farmers around to increase their incomes and become richwealthier.
-Cut this sentence in two because it was really long
-"Good management" + "management skills" = redundant
-No need for quotes around "new farmers" - more on that here:
https://www.grammarly.com/blog/quotation-marks/
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Wow, your English has gotten so good! Amazing :)
March 30, 2021
Talent is the key to implementing rural vitalization strategyies, and new-type professional farmers are one of the important forcesplay an essential role.
Could you please tell me why it is “implementing” here instead of “implement”?
March 30, 2021
Thank you very much
March 31, 2021
Ah yes - always "the key to doing something" with the verb in the gerund form. The key to winning, the key to living longer, the key to earning more money...like that.
March 31, 2021
Thank you very much.
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Talent is the key to implement rural vitalization strategy, and new-type professional farmers are one of the important forces. Talent is the key to implementing rural vitalization strateg "Play an essential role" is a collocation meaning that these formers are a particularly important part of these strategies. |
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These"new farmers" who have knowledge, technology, good management and management skills shed sweat, become the pioneers of the new business form and the leaders of developing agriculture through science and technology, thus driving farmers around to increase their incomes and become rich. These -Cut this sentence in two because it was really long -"Good management" + "management skills" = redundant -No need for quotes around "new farmers" - more on that here: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/quotation-marks/ |
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