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Polyraspad

Jan. 16, 2025

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Positive memories. Part 1.

Back the day ago, when I was a child, I spended a lot of time with my old brother and cousin.
All the time we played outside, created our own games. For example, we had a game with rules to destray a oppenent ball by throwing off yours from some certain height. We lit fires and ran around the backyard. We rode bikes.

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Positive memories. Part 1.

Back in the day ago<good?> old days, when I was a child, I spendedt a lot of time with my older brother and cousin.

Less professional and more slangy = "back in the day"

All the time wWe played outside, all the time and created our own games.

For example, we had a game with rules where one had to destraoy an oppeonent's ball by throwing off yoursyour ball from some certain height.

I don't really understand how to play this game :). You throw YOUR ball and it destroys the opposition's ball? How?

We lit fires and ran around the backyard.

We rode bikes.

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Good job! I hope you stopped lighting fires! 🚒

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Polyraspad

Jan. 17, 2025

15

Lol, I forgot to write "sand balls")

Positive memories. Part 1.

This is correct, but we would often use the expression "Happy memories" instead.

Back in the day ago, when I was a child, I spendedt a lot of time with my old brother and my cousin.

All the time we played outside, createding/inventing our own games.

We would normally inverse the text to say "We played outside all the time"

For example, we had a game with rules to destraoy an oppeonent's ball by throwing off yours off from somea certain height.

We lit fires and ran around the backyard.

Again, this is correct, but we would more easily stay "We started fires..."

We rode bikes.

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Well done. It sounds like you had a fun childhood!

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Polyraspad

Jan. 17, 2025

15

Thank you!

Positive memories. Part 1.


Positive memories. Part 1.

This is correct, but we would often use the expression "Happy memories" instead.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Back the day ago, when I was a child, I spended a lot of time with my old brother and cousin.


Back in the day ago, when I was a child, I spendedt a lot of time with my old brother and my cousin.

Back in the day ago<good?> old days, when I was a child, I spendedt a lot of time with my older brother and cousin.

Less professional and more slangy = "back in the day"

All the time we played outside, created our own games.


All the time we played outside, createding/inventing our own games.

We would normally inverse the text to say "We played outside all the time"

All the time wWe played outside, all the time and created our own games.

For example, we had a game with rules to destray a oppenent ball by throwing off yours from some certain height.


For example, we had a game with rules to destraoy an oppeonent's ball by throwing off yours off from somea certain height.

For example, we had a game with rules where one had to destraoy an oppeonent's ball by throwing off yoursyour ball from some certain height.

I don't really understand how to play this game :). You throw YOUR ball and it destroys the opposition's ball? How?

We lit fires and ran around the backyard.


We lit fires and ran around the backyard.

Again, this is correct, but we would more easily stay "We started fires..."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We rode bikes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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