March 31, 2021
Please help me to improve my writings
1. With the development of Web 2.0 stage such as YouTube, Wechat, even though the most conservative teacher can't sit back and ignore the influence on student's ways of learning.
I don't want to use "with the development of …". Could you please recommend me better or natural expressions? Thank you.
1. With the developmentrise/creation of Web 2.0 stages/technology such as YouTube, Wechat, even though the most conservative teacher can't sit back and ignore the influence on student's ways of learning.
I don't think "with the development of.." is too bad. "with the rise of " or "with the creation of" are other possibilities .
Also, you would want to change 'stage' to the plural 'stages' as you go on to list more than one example. Or you can use the word technology either.
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Please help me to improve my writings |
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1. With the development of Web 2.0 stage such as YouTube, Wechat, even though the most conservative teacher can't sit back and ignore the influence on student's ways of learning. 1. With the I don't think "with the development of.." is too bad. "with the rise of " or "with the creation of" are other possibilities . Also, you would want to change 'stage' to the plural 'stages' as you go on to list more than one example. Or you can use the word technology either. |
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I don't want to use "with the development of …". |
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Could you please recommend me better or natural expressions? |
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Thank you. |
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