April 3, 2021
Please correct me.
1. I would describe myself as a super positive person. When I find myself frustrated or overwhelmed with negative thoughts, I would employ positive energies to combat Negativity.
2. Goli is defrauding Mr. Vaz by fraudulently changing documents of the customs by a clever scheme.
Please correct me.
1. I would describe myself as a super positive person.
When I find myself frustrated or overwhelmed with negative thoughts, I would employ positive energies to combat Nnegativity.
The two verbs in this sentence (verb=action words: in this sentence, they are the words "find" and "would employ") are in different tenses. I would suggest amending the sentence by taking the word "would" out to make this a statement of fact rather than a hypothetical or conditional statement. The use of "would" in this context makes it seem like you're saying that employing positive energies is something you WOULD do to combat negativity rather than something you ALREADY do to combat negativity. The sentence is still totally understandable and this error does not detract from your meaning, so good job my friend!!! :)
2. Goli is defrauding Mr. Vaz by fraudulently changing documents of the customs bythe customs documents using a clever scheme.
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These are very interesting sentences with a good and correct use of advanced vocabulary, well done!!!! The only errors are very small and overall do not take away from your meaning.
April 4, 2021
Thanks
Please correct me.
1. I would describe myself as a super positive person.
When I find myself frustrated or overwhelmed with negative thoughts, I would employ positive energies to combat Negativity.
2. Goli is defrauding Mr. Vaz by fraudulently changing documents of the customs by a clever scheme.
April 4, 2021
Thanks
April 4, 2021
You’re welcome :)
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When I find myself frustrated or overwhelmed with negative thoughts, I would employ positive energies to combat Negativity. This sentence has been marked as perfect! When I find myself frustrated or overwhelmed with negative thoughts, I The two verbs in this sentence (verb=action words: in this sentence, they are the words "find" and "would employ") are in different tenses. I would suggest amending the sentence by taking the word "would" out to make this a statement of fact rather than a hypothetical or conditional statement. The use of "would" in this context makes it seem like you're saying that employing positive energies is something you WOULD do to combat negativity rather than something you ALREADY do to combat negativity. The sentence is still totally understandable and this error does not detract from your meaning, so good job my friend!!! :) |
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2. Goli is defrauding Mr. Vaz by fraudulently changing documents of the customs by a clever scheme. This sentence has been marked as perfect! 2. Goli is defrauding Mr. Vaz by fraudulently changing |
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1. I would describe myself as a super positive person. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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