March 27, 2021
Plastic Currency
Last past Sunday an Australian language exchange partner showed an Australian plastic currency, which somewhat surprised me. There is no doubt that there should be existing the plastic currency such as an Australian money or others. I guess that I have fixed thinking about the currency like the currency should be the paper. When I took a look at the plastic currency at first, it's beautiful and really cool. Given that they may be used in Japan, as there are so many vending machines in Japan, I'm worried about the security. I'm not sure, but I guess we had better use the paper currency rather than the plastic currency in aspects of the security. It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much easier than paper currency, although I'm not sure of the plastic currency's security at all.
Plastic Currency
Last past Sunday an Australian language exchange partner showed me an Australian plastic currency, which somewhat surprised me.
You don't need both last and past; additionally past sounds much more natural. Also, adding "me" after "showed" makes it complete, as you need a subject.
There is no doubt that there should be existing the plastic currency existing such as an Australian money or other currencies.
I guess that I have fixed thinking about the currency, like the currencyat it should be the paper.
You don't need articles if you're talking about currency in general. Also, adding a comma after your first clause makes the sentence easier to understand.
When I took a look at the plastic currency at first, it's was beautiful and really cool.
You want to keep your tenses consistent here, as they're both past actions/events.
Given that they may be used in Japan, as there are so many vending machines in Japan, I'm worried about the security.
I'm not sure, but I guess we had better use the paper currency rather than the plastic currency in aspects of the security.
Again, you don't need to use "the" in front of every noun or it sounds off, as you're talking about a general concept. :)
It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much more easierly than paper currency, although I'm not sure ofat all sure about the plastic currency's security at all.
It sounds more natural if you put phrases like "at all" in front of the noun you're modifying.
March 27, 2021
Good journal! It's interesting to learn that Australia uses plastic currency and not paper.
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Last past Sunday an Australian language exchange partner showed an Australian plastic currency, which somewhat surprised me. Last You don't need both last and past; additionally past sounds much more natural. Also, adding "me" after "showed" makes it complete, as you need a subject. |
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There is no doubt that there should be existing the plastic currency such as an Australian money or others. There is no doubt that there should |
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I guess that I have fixed thinking about the currency like the currency should be the paper. I guess that You don't need articles if you're talking about currency in general. Also, adding a comma after your first clause makes the sentence easier to understand. |
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When I took a look at the plastic currency at first, it's beautiful and really cool. When I took a look at the You want to keep your tenses consistent here, as they're both past actions/events. |
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Given that they may be used in Japan, as there are so many vending machines in Japan, I'm worried about the security. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm not sure but I guess we had better use the paper currency rather than the plastic currency in aspects of the security. |
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It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much easier than paper currency, although I 'm not sure of the |
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plastic currency 's security at all. |
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I'm not sure, but I guess we had better use the paper currency rather than the plastic currency in aspects of the security. I'm not sure, but I guess we had better use the Again, you don't need to use "the" in front of every noun or it sounds off, as you're talking about a general concept. :) |
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It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much easier than paper currency, although I'm not sure of the |
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plastic currency 's security at all. |
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It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much easier than paper currency, although I'm not sure of the |
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It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much easier than paper currency, although I'm not sure of the |
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It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much easier than paper currency, although I'm not sure of the plastic currency's security at all. It seems It sounds more natural if you put phrases like "at all" in front of the noun you're modifying. |
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