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So kind will be wrong if there isn't another part of a sentence like "that (an attribute)" Very kind would be correct. "Rather unlike" would not have "rather". Stop placement between one and 2 is incorrect. it should be directly after one. An example of "So-- that-----" occurs in 'So rude that they didnt teach---". It is not "something", it is "anything". They didnt teach us something means something was not taught meanwhile They didnt teach us anything means they taught nothing. Full stop after me. Not "in this year" it is "this year". "More kind" becomes "kinder".

There is a system that pharmacists and physicians can use to see the patient’s illness, treatment medicines that should be used. They check the medications and prepare with care.

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There is a system that pharmacists and physicians can use to see the patient’s illness, treatment, and medicines that should be used. They check the medications and prepare with care.

Also, there are 12 pharmacists in the service every morning who log in to the system, and look for the services, and. Then, all the patients' orders are printed.

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First off all, last summer I did my internship in thea hospital pharmacy.

The staff wasere so kind to me, rather unlike the internship I had before this one . 2 years ago the staff wasere so rude and they didn't teach something to meme anything. However in, this year, the employees were more kinder to me and they encouraged usme to learn some things.

1. Since "staff" refers to all the people working somewhere, it uses the same verb forms as "they" does.
2. The use of "us" is a bit jarring, since so far you haven't mentioned any other interns. I think it would be clearer either to just use "me" or to say something like "...the employees were kinder to me and they encouraged all the interns to learn some things."

Of course, they didn’t allow me to usedo computer-based works because we areI'm not a pharmacists (yet)!!

1. "Work" usually doesn't take an "s" at the end, even if you're talking about a lot of it. For example, you would just say "I have a lot of work".
2. Try to keep the pronouns consistent throughout a sentence. So either "they didn't allow us to do... because we are not pharmacists" or what I wrote above sounds smoother.

Anyway, while ıI was working in a hospital pharmacy I was able to learn what pharmacists make in hospitals, f. For instance, they have a system on a computer, but every hospital has a different system and it is a little bit complicated.

There is a system that pharmacists and physicians can use to see thea patient’s illness, treatment and any medicines that should be used. They check the medications and prepare them with care.

Also, there are 12 pharmacists in the service every morning who log in to the system, look for the services, andwho log into the system every morning, look through the records, and print all the patients' orders are printed.

I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "look for the services". If they're looking at medical orders/data then I think "records" fits nicely.

According to thisThat's how they prepare the correct medications.

What you wrote isn't wrong but it sounds a bit unnatural.

Also, there is a division of labor in the services and sworkforce. Some pharmacists are responsible for the stock control, expiration date control, and declaration of the medications in terms of drug-drug interaction, and drug -patient interaction to the Turkish pharmacovigilance industry.

Overall, there are important and valuable works to dojobs for the pharmacist to do.