May 19, 2021
Person
My professor from the university. He was my supervisor in the creating process of my master thesis and gave me many hinds how to be a manager after graduation.
A Person / The Person
You could really use an article here, although the meaning of the title isn't really clear...
My professor from the university.
On it's own, this sentence doesn't really work - it's grammatically correct, but needs to be joined with the second sentence to form a full sentence that makes logical sense
HeMy professor from the university was my supervisor in the creating process of creating my master thesis and. He gave me many hindts about how to become a manager after graduation.
Apart from needing to form this as a single sentence, it wasn't too bad. It needed the word order changing slightly. Hints = tips / advice (Rat/Ratschäge). Better so use 'become', as you have to go through a process to get to be a manager, which takes time.
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I was able to understand what you were trying to say, it just needed a bit of 'adjustment'. I appreciate the rules are rather different from yours - I'm learning German, it takes time.
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Person A Person / The Person You could really use an article here, although the meaning of the title isn't really clear... |
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My professor from the university. My professor from the university On it's own, this sentence doesn't really work - it's grammatically correct, but needs to be joined with the second sentence to form a full sentence that makes logical sense |
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He was my supervisor in the creating process of my master thesis and gave me many hinds how to be a manager after graduation.
Apart from needing to form this as a single sentence, it wasn't too bad. It needed the word order changing slightly. Hints = tips / advice (Rat/Ratschäge). Better so use 'become', as you have to go through a process to get to be a manager, which takes time. |
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