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March 22, 2021

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Peanuts

I have peanuts allergen. For the first time in a while, I tried to eat cookies that contain crushed peanuts. However, I could only eat one because I thought I'll be not feeling well. When I eat Kameda Crisps, I firstly separate crackers and peanuts and eat only crackers. It was convenient because my father liked peanuts.

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Peanuts

I have a peanuts allergeny.

I have an allergy BUT peanuts are an allergen

For the first time in a while, I tried to eat cookies that contained crushed peanuts.

contain = present (if you are eating the cookies right now)
contained = past (if you ate the cookies earlier)

However, I could only eat one because I thought I'll bewould not be feeling well.

Peanuts

I have peanuts allergeny.

For the first time in a while, I tried to eat cookies that contained crushed peanuts.

However, I could only eat one because I thought I'll be nothat I wouldn't feeling well.

When I eat Kameda Crisps, I firstly separate the crackers and peanuts and eat only the crackers.

It was convenient because my father liked peanuts.

While this is a grammatically correct sentence. It doesn't really make sense contextually. If you're implying that your father has passed away, then you would use this sentence. However, if your father is still alive, you would say, "It's convenient because my father likes peanuts" or "It was convenient when I was a child because my father likes peanuts".

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Peanuts

I have a peanuts allergeny.

For the first time in a while, I tried to eat cookies that contained crushed peanuts.

However, I could only eat one because I thought I'll be no might feeling unwell.

When I eat Kameda Crisps, I firstly separate the crackers and peanuts and eat only the crackers.

It wais convenient because my father likeds peanuts.

Peanuts


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I have peanuts allergen.


I have a peanuts allergeny.

I have peanuts allergeny.

I have a peanuts allergeny.

I have an allergy BUT peanuts are an allergen

For the first time in a while, I tried to eat cookies that contain crushed peanuts.


For the first time in a while, I tried to eat cookies that contained crushed peanuts.

For the first time in a while, I tried to eat cookies that contained crushed peanuts.

For the first time in a while, I tried to eat cookies that contained crushed peanuts.

contain = present (if you are eating the cookies right now) contained = past (if you ate the cookies earlier)

However, I could only eat one because I thought I'll be not feeling well.


However, I could only eat one because I thought I'll be no might feeling unwell.

However, I could only eat one because I thought I'll be nothat I wouldn't feeling well.

However, I could only eat one because I thought I'll bewould not be feeling well.

When I eat Kameda Crisps, I firstly separate crackers and peanuts and eat only crackers.


When I eat Kameda Crisps, I firstly separate the crackers and peanuts and eat only the crackers.

When I eat Kameda Crisps, I firstly separate the crackers and peanuts and eat only the crackers.

It was convenient because my father liked peanuts.


It wais convenient because my father likeds peanuts.

It was convenient because my father liked peanuts.

While this is a grammatically correct sentence. It doesn't really make sense contextually. If you're implying that your father has passed away, then you would use this sentence. However, if your father is still alive, you would say, "It's convenient because my father likes peanuts" or "It was convenient when I was a child because my father likes peanuts".

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