Sept. 3, 2025
PART I Artificial Intelligence and Employment
In recent years, the debate over the possible ramifications of AI for the job market has gained momentum. While some contend that the dissemination of Artificial Intelligence eventually will bring about grave detrimental effects for employment, I assert that it will give rise to brand-new job categories and establish more work spaces overall.
Firstly, substituting monotonous and routine jobs with AI will increase both efficiency and productivity, for instance in manufacturing. In this way, we reduce the ultimate price of the product while fostering competition between rival companies, which inevitably leads to innovation.
Secondly, Artificial Intelligence creats a vast array of new job opportunities, for example in fields of machine learning and data analysis. Those flexible who could quickly adjust to the new job market would soon prosper, however others might struggle to stay on the surface without further professional development.
Some people argue that artificial intelligence will create more jobs than it destroys, while others believe it poses a serious threat to employment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
PART Iart 1: Artificial Intelligence and Employment
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Firstly, substituting monotonous and routine jobs with AI will increase both efficiency and productivity, for instance including manufacturing.
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Secondly, Artificial IntelligenceI creates a vast array of new job opportunities, for example in fields of machine learning and data analysis in fields like machine learning and data analytics. For example, there has been a surge of jobs as a machine learning engineer and data scientist. Moreover, there are more data analyst jobs that require knowledge of Large Language Models (LLMs), such as ChatGPT and Gemini AI.
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You're close to a C1 level in English, but you need to tighten up your grammar, and make your sentences more concise and grammatically sound. Also, look more into this topic, especially when you're providing examples of your statements. You did a good job, but I am being critical because I'm in this field, and I wanted to give you my expertise.
Sept. 3, 2025
Danke schön! I found the word ''contend'' in an example essay, could you please elaborate why it was used incorrectly? I used ''Artificial Intelligence'' instead of ''AI'' as a synonym to avoid repeating myself for the third time. I appreciate your detailed corrections and explanations! I will delve deeper into this topic.
Sept. 3, 2025
By the way, „Die Verwandlung“ is a really good book! :)
Sept. 3, 2025
You used it correctly in the text, but I put argue as an alternative. I should've added that is a word that you can use. Off-topic, I love „Die Verwandlung“, but need to improve on my German to appreciate it a lot more.
While some contend that the dissemination of Aartificial Iintelligence will eventually will bring about grave and detrimental effects for employment, I assert that it will give rise to brand-new job categories and establish more work spaces overall.
Firstly, substituting monotonous and routine jobs with AI will increase both efficiency and productivity, for instance, in manufacturing.
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Those flexible who couldenough to quickly adjust to the new job market would soon prosper,; however, others might struggle to stay on the surface without further professional development.
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Great
Sept. 3, 2025
Thank you, orange81!
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In recent years, the debate over the possible ramifications of AI for the job market has gained momentum.
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While some contend that the dissemination of Artificial Intelligence eventually will bring about grave detrimental effects for employment, I assert that it will give rise to brand-new job categories and establish more work spaces overall. While some contend that the dissemination of While some |
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Firstly, substituting monotonous and routine jobs with AI will increase both efficiency and productivity, for instance in manufacturing. Firstly, substituting monotonous and routine jobs with AI will increase both efficiency and productivity, for instance, in manufacturing. Firstly, substituting monotonous and routine jobs with AI will increase both efficiency and productivity, |
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In this way, we reduce the ultimate price of the product while fostering competition between rival companies, which inevitably leads to innovation.
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Secondly, Artificial Intelligence creats a vast array of new job opportunities, for example in fields of machine learning and data analysis. Secondly, Secondly, A It's more natural to say data analytics as a field. Also, bring in examples when you're stating a point that you're arguing. |
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Those flexible who could quickly adjust to the new job market would soon prosper, however others might struggle to stay on the surface without further professional development. Those flexible Those I edited this sentence to sound more natural. |
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