April 19, 2021
Parks near My Home
Unlikely other cities, Suwon has many big parks.
Near my home, there are three big parks as well.
On the east side, there is the "Metan Park" where many pet lovers visit to their communities.
There is a big soccer field and two tennis courts in the park.
So many players are working out every day.
On the south side, there is a park that called "Hyowon Park".
There is a big concert room for music performances and plays.
Chinese style houses are there for shooting dramas.
If it is available, many people visit to enjoy and to take pictures.
On the west side, there is a park where is my favorite one.
It is for teenagers, so there is a big library, a playground, a good quality swimming pool and big garden.
My son and I usually go there for borrowing books and practicing swimming.
Different features of those parks make me fun.
Because of these parks, I like my house.
Parks near My Home
Unlikely other cities, Suwon has many big parks.
Near my home, there are three big parks as well.
This is a great sentence, but does not flow well with the previous one. Since you have already said that there are many parks in Suwon, your next sentence should be emphasising that. So you could say "In fact, there are three big parks near my home."
On the east side, there is the "Metan Park" where many pet lovers visit to their communities.
There is a lso a big soccer field and two tennis courts in the park.
So many players are working out there every day.
On the south side, there is a park that called "Hyowon Park".
TAt this park, there is a big concert room for music performances and plays.
Chinese style houses are there too for shooting dramas.
IfWhen it is available, many people visit to enjoyopen to visits, many people go there to have a good time and to take pictures.
On the west side, there is another park, whereich is my favorite one.
It is for teenagers, so there is a big library, a playground, a good quality swimming pool and big garden.
My son and I usually go there forto borrowing books and practicinge swimming.
DThe different features of those parks make theme fun.
An alternate sentence: the different features of these parks make me happy/give me joy.
Because of these parks, I like my house.
Feedback
I loved learning about the parks next to your house! All the sentences, except one, are great. Practice more with connecting the sentences so that your writing flows more. Connectors and conjunctions like "in fact", "however", can help you do that. Overall, EXCELLENT JOB!
April 20, 2021
Thank you for your comment. I'll keep your word about connectors. Actually it is hard for me now.
Parks near My Home
Unlikely other cities, Suwon has many big parks.
Near my home, there are three big parks as well.
On the east side, there is the "Metan Park" where many pet lovers visit to their communities.
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Therse are many athletes who working out every day.
Athlete is another word for player. For example instead of saying soccer player. Soccer athlete.
On the south side, there is a park that called "Hyowon Park".
There is a big concert room for music performances and plays.
On the west side, there is a park whereich is my favorite onepark.
On the west side of the city, there is a park which is my favorite.
My son and I usually go there for borrowingto check out books and practicinge swimming.
Different features of those parks make mare fun.
The different features of the park make it fun to visit.
Feedback
I’ve heard of Suwon. Isn’t it known for its good chicken? I’ve heard it has the best chicken in Korea.
April 20, 2021
Great! You know the chicken of Suwon. It is very delicious. :)
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Near my home, there are three big parks as well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Near my home, there are three big parks as well. This is a great sentence, but does not flow well with the previous one. Since you have already said that there are many parks in Suwon, your next sentence should be emphasising that. So you could say "In fact, there are three big parks near my home." |
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On the east side, there is the "Metan Park" where many pet lovers visit to their communities. This sentence has been marked as perfect! On the east side, there is |
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There is a big soccer field and two tennis courts in the park. There is a |
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So many players are working out every day.
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On the south side, there is a park that called "Hyowon Park". This sentence has been marked as perfect! On the south side, there is a park |
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There is a big concert room for music performances and plays. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Chinese style houses are there for shooting dramas. Chinese style houses are there too for shooting dramas. |
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If it is available, many people visit to enjoy and to take pictures.
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It is for teenagers, so there is a big library, a playground, a good quality swimming pool and big garden. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My son and I usually go there for borrowing books and practicing swimming. My son and I usually go there My son and I usually go there |
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Different features of those parks make me fun. Different features of those parks The different features of the park make it fun to visit.
An alternate sentence: the different features of these parks make me happy/give me joy. |
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Because of these parks, I like my house. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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