May 23, 2021
Parks Around My House
Near my house, there are three big parks where I used to walk
On the east side, there is "Metan Park" where many pet lovers visit their communities.
Also, there is a big soccer field and two tennis courts.
Many athletes work out every day.
On the south side, there is a park which is called "Hywon Park"
At this park, there is a big concert room for music performances.
I like an open-air theatre there.
On the west side, there is another park that is my favorite one.
The park is for teenagers, so there is a big library, a playground and a good quality swimming pool.
My son and I usually go there to borrow books and practice swimming.
The different features of those parks make me happy.
Parks Aaround My House
('Around' isn't capitalized in the title because it is a preposition)
The title could alternatively be:
The Parks in My Area
The Parks in My Neighborhood.
Near my house, there are three big parks where I used tolike to take walks.
From the rest of the essay, it seems like this is something you still do, so I changed it to the present tense.
On the east sidEast of my house, there is "Metan Park" where many pet lovers visit their communitiesget together.
I wasn't sure what you meant by visit their communities so I changed it to "get together"
Also, there is a big soccer field and two tennis courts.
Many athletes work out there every day.
OnTo the south side, there is a park which is called "Hywon Park".
I removed "a park' so there's less repetition.
AtIn this park, there is a big concert room for music performances.
I like an open-air theatre there.
OnTo the west side, there is another park that, which is my favorite one.
The park is for teenagers, so there is a big library, a playground and a good -quality swimming pool.
My son and I usually go there to borrow books and practice swimming.
The different features of those parks make me happy.
Alternatively:
I really appreciate the different amenities that these parks offer.
Feedback
It sounds like you live in a great location! I wish I had so many parks in my neighborhood. :)
May 23, 2021
Thank you for correcting. I really like to live here.
|
Parks Around My House Parks ('Around' isn't capitalized in the title because it is a preposition) The title could alternatively be: The Parks in My Area The Parks in My Neighborhood. |
|
Near my house, there are three big parks where I used to walk Near my house, there are three big parks where I From the rest of the essay, it seems like this is something you still do, so I changed it to the present tense. |
|
On the east side, there is "Metan Park" where many pet lovers visit their communities.
I wasn't sure what you meant by visit their communities so I changed it to "get together" |
|
Also, there is a big soccer field and two tennis courts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Many athletes work out every day. Many athletes work out there every day. |
|
On the south side, there is a park which is called "Hywon Park"
I removed "a park' so there's less repetition. |
|
At this park, there is a big concert room for music performances.
|
|
I like an open-air theatre there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
On the west side, there is another park that is my favorite one.
|
|
The park is for teenagers, so there is a big library, a playground and a good quality swimming pool. The park is for teenagers, so there is a big library, a playground and a good |
|
My son and I usually go there to borrow books and practice swimming. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
The different features of those parks make me happy. The different features of those parks make me happy. Alternatively: I really appreciate the different amenities that these parks offer. |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium