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Sept. 18, 2025

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Pakistan

There are two countries that have a significant influence on Pakistan.
One is the United Kingdom, and the other is Saudi Arabia.
Because every Muslim hopes to make a pilgrimage to Mecca or Medina, Saudi Arabia is important.
Because the region was once under British rule, they have an obsession with Britain.
Actually rich people in Islamabad arrange for their children to be educated in Britain.
Most families have 5 to 8 children because Islam encourages childbirth.
Children from ordinary families are unlikely to study in the UK, but they all speak great English.


有两个国家对巴基斯坦影响很大。
一个是英国,另一个是沙乌地。
因为每个穆斯林都希望去麦加或麦地那朝圣。
因为巴基斯坦曾经被英国统治,所以他们对英国痴迷。
事实上伊斯兰堡的富人安排子女在英国受教育。
多数家庭养育5到8个孩子,因伊斯兰教鼓励生育。
普通家庭的孩子不可能去英国留学,但他们的英语都很不错。

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There are two countries that have a significant influence onver Pakistan.

Saying "on Pakistan" isn't incorrect. But people would often say over. :)

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Very good. My only feedback would be that India is hugely significant to Pakistan, so maybe you meant to say "positive influence"?
Otherwise very good 👍

Because the region was once under British rule, ithey haves an obsession with Britain.

Region is singular

Most families have 5 to 8 children because Islam encourages childbirth.people to have children.

It’s not the act of childbirth that is encouraged.

Children from ordinary families are unlikely to study in the UK, but they all speak great English.

‘good English’ is better.

Children from ordinary families are unlikely to study in the UK, but they all speak great English.


Children from ordinary families are unlikely to study in the UK, but they all speak great English.

‘good English’ is better.

Because Pakistan was once under British rule, they have obsession with Britain.


Because every Muslim hopes to make a pilgrimage to Mecca or Medina, Saudi Arabia is important.


Because the region was once under British rule, they have an obsession with Britain.


Because the region was once under British rule, ithey haves an obsession with Britain.

Region is singular

Actually rich people in Islamabad arrange for their children to be educated in Britain.


Most families have 5 to 8 children because Islam encourages childbirth.


Most families have 5 to 8 children because Islam encourages childbirth.people to have children.

It’s not the act of childbirth that is encouraged.

Because every Muslim hopes to make a pilgrimage to Mecca or Medina.


Because the region was once under British rule, they have obsession with Britain.


Pakistan


There are two countries that have a significant influence on Pakistan.


There are two countries that have a significant influence onver Pakistan.

Saying "on Pakistan" isn't incorrect. But people would often say over. :)

One is the United Kingdom, and the other is Saudi Arabia.


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