Dec. 23, 2022
Our goverment have eased the policy of defense COVID-19
Our goverment have eased the policy of COVID-19 recently. So lots of people will be affected by this viras in our country. Most of my friend around me are get affected. They tell me some symptoms like temperature high(around 39 degree), get faver, can not go to sleep well. But all of them who get affected will be recover around 5 days. I hope all of us could overcome those hard things which this pandymic brought to us finally.
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I'm sorry to hear what you're going through and I hope it gets better soon. Good work on the writing.
Our goverment haves eased the policy of defense against COVID-19.
A sentence as the title is okay sometimes, but I would change it to something like this: "The Ease of Government Policy on COVID-19"
Our goverment haves eased the policy ofregarding COVID-19 recently.
So, lots of people will be affected by this viraus in our country.
"Lots" is a bit casual, so I would write "a lot of" instead.
Most of my friend around me are get afting infected.
They tell me of some symptoms likesuch as high temperature high(around 39 degrees), get faverting fever/feverish, cand not going to sleep well.
But all of them who get affected will be recover around 5 days.
I hope all of us could overcome thoese hard things which this pandyemic has brought to us finallyupon us.
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