Jan. 4, 2026
One Day Off At Home
Today is the first work day after New Year's holiday, but I asked for two days off so I didn't go to work today. I mainly researched universities which can issue a IT master's degree and studied Redis architecture-a type of database architecture. What frustrated me is that pursuing a master's degree costs around 20 thousand dollars every year and the total cost is around 40 thousand dollars. It's really pricey to me and I need to think about it carefully to avoid affecting my family. Maybe I should research whether there is another way to get more immigration points and household registration points.
I mainly researched universities which can issue an IT master's degree and studied Redis architecture-a type of database architecture.
just a nit, but since I pronounce IT like "eye-tee" then I would use "an" in front of it b/c it starts with a vowel sound
What frustrated me is that pursuing a master's degree costs around 20 thousand dollars evpery year and the total cost is around 40 thousand dollars.
"per year" makes it clearer that the cost for you will be 20k each year you attend. However, the original is understandable too since you added the sentence with the total cost
Jan. 5, 2026
Thanks
One Day Off At Home
Today is the first work day after New Year's holiday, but I asked for two days more/extra off so I didn't go to work today.
less ambiguous
I mainly researched universities which can issue an IT master's degree and studied Redis architecture-a type of database architecture.
What frustrated me is that pursuing a master's degree costs around 20 thousand dollars every year and the total cost is around 40 thousand dollars.
It's really pricey to me and I need to think about it carefully to avoid affecting my family.
Maybe I should research whether there is another way to get more immigration points and household registration points.
Jan. 4, 2026
sorry, more/extra should preceed 'days'
Jan. 5, 2026
thanks
Today is the first work day after the New Year's holiday, but I asked for two days off so I didn't go to work today.
I mainly researched universities which can issue an IT master's degree and studied Redis architecture- - a type of database architecture.
You could also say universities which offer an IT master's degree
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Jan. 5, 2026
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Today is the first work day after New Year's holiday, but I asked for two days off so I didn't go to work today. Today is the first work day after the New Year's holiday, but I asked for two days off so I didn't go to work today. Today is the first work day after New Year's holiday, but I asked for two days more/extra off so I didn't go to work today. less ambiguous |
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I mainly researched universities which can issue a IT master's degree and studied Redis architecture-a type of database architecture. I mainly researched universities which can issue an IT master's degree and studied Redis architecture You could also say universities which offer an IT master's degree I mainly researched universities which can issue an IT master's degree and studied Redis architecture-a type of database architecture. I mainly researched universities which can issue an IT master's degree and studied Redis architecture-a type of database architecture. just a nit, but since I pronounce IT like "eye-tee" then I would use "an" in front of it b/c it starts with a vowel sound |
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What frustrated me is that pursuing a master's degree costs around 20 thousand dollars every year and the total cost is around 40 thousand dollars. This sentence has been marked as perfect! What frustrated me is that pursuing a master's degree costs around 20 thousand dollars "per year" makes it clearer that the cost for you will be 20k each year you attend. However, the original is understandable too since you added the sentence with the total cost |
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It's really pricey to me and I need to think about it carefully to avoid affecting my family. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe I should research whether there is another way to get more immigration points and household registration points. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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