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akihello

May 1, 2021

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One day, I got in the bathroom several times...

I often have stomachaches easily these days.
I think that's because of the weather which has been chilly.


このごろよく腹痛がする。
それはたぷん、肌寒い天気のせいだと思うんです。

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One day, I got inwent to the bathroom several times...

This sounds more natural in the US.

残念です。

I often haveget stomachaches easily these days.

or

I easily get stomachaches these days.
I get a lot of stomachaches these days.
Lately I've been getting a lot of stomachaches.
Recently I've been getting a lot of stomachaches.

I think thait's because of the weather which has been. It's become chilly.

or

I think it's because of the weather. It's gotten chilly.

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よく出来ました。お大事に。

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akihello

May 2, 2021

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One day, I got inwent to the bathroom several times...

たしかに、惜しかった。(あれ? 言葉の選び方の話じゃなかったかな…?)

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akihello

May 2, 2021

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添削をありがとう! しっかり覚えなくっちゃ…。

Thanks for the corrections! I'll note them and try to remember firmly.

One day, I got in the bathroom several times...


One day, I got inwent to the bathroom several times...

This sounds more natural in the US. 残念です。

I often have stomachaches easily these days.


I often haveget stomachaches easily these days.

or I easily get stomachaches these days. I get a lot of stomachaches these days. Lately I've been getting a lot of stomachaches. Recently I've been getting a lot of stomachaches.

I think that's because of the weather which has been chilly.


I think thait's because of the weather which has been. It's become chilly.

or I think it's because of the weather. It's gotten chilly.

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