June 2, 2025
On whether money can buy happiness
It's true that money can give you the freedom to buy whatever you want and meet your needs, but some people just want more and more and never get satisfied. Wealthy people with a lot of money always chase unnecessary things like luxuries or a wasteful lifestyle, that cause them a lot of stress, and in the long run, will make them feel trapped or even enslaved by financial obligations. In my opinion, and to paraphrase Seneca, a rich person isn't who has the most, but who needs the least.
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In titles, it usually goes like this: capitalize the first word, the last word, and any important words in between.
It's true that money can give you the freedom to buy whatever you want and meet your needs, but some people just want more and more and never get satisfied.
Wealthy people with a lot of money always chase unnecessary things, like luxuries or a wasteful lifestyle, that cause them a lot of stress, and in the long run, will make them feel trapped or even enslaved by financial obligations in the long run.
While this could be split into two or more separate sentences or split up with a semicolon or something, this is one way that we can keep the sentence whole with appositive phrases and commas.
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I like to use and to read appositive phrases, and it seems you do too. Overall, your ideas are plenty clear; there are only some grammatical issues. Also, shoutout to Seneca the Younger. His Letters to Lucilius number 9 is a favorite.
June 3, 2025
Thank you! 😊
On whether money can buy happiness
It's true that money can give you the freedom to buy whatever you want and meet your needs, but some people just want more and more and never get satisfied.
Wealthy people with a lot of money always chase unnecessary things like luxuries or a wasteful lifestyle, that. This can cause them a lot of stress, and in the long run, will make them feel trapped or even enslaved by financial obligations.
In my opinion, and to paraphrase Seneca, a rich person isn't who has the most, but who needs the least.
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Perfect!
June 2, 2025
Thank you! 😊
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On whether money can buy happiness This sentence has been marked as perfect! On In titles, it usually goes like this: capitalize the first word, the last word, and any important words in between. |
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It's true that money can give you the freedom to buy whatever you want and meet your needs, but some people just want more and more and never get satisfied. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Wealthy people with a lot of money always chase unnecessary things like luxuries or a wasteful lifestyle, that cause them a lot of stress, and in the long run, will make them feel trapped or even enslaved by financial obligations. Wealthy people with a lot of money always chase unnecessary things like luxuries or a wasteful lifestyle Wealthy people with a lot of money always chase unnecessary things, like luxuries or a wasteful lifestyle, that cause them a lot of stress While this could be split into two or more separate sentences or split up with a semicolon or something, this is one way that we can keep the sentence whole with appositive phrases and commas. |
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In my opinion, and to paraphrase Seneca, a rich person isn't who has the most, but who needs the least. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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