Feb. 23, 2026
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I also eat snacks around 3 PM. I know it’s not good, but I can’t help but eat them. There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releases appear one of the other. Snacks tasted salty or made of rice flour are really many in Japan. What kind of snacks is famous in your country? I’ll look it up on Amazon.
What is a habit you’d like to break?
I also eat snacks around 3 PM.
I know it’s not good, but I can’t help but eat them.
There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releases appear one of the after another.
I changed this phrase to sound more natural as an English speaker.
Snacks tasted salty orThere are lots of salty snacks and snacks made out of rice flour are really many in Japan.
What kind of snacks isare famous in your country?
If you're referring to multiple objects, use the verb "are," not "is." A famous snack in the United States is Doritos. In the Philippines, a famous snack is ube jam: https://www.tripzilla.com/tpb-legendary-filipino-snacks/113513.
I’ll look ithem up on Amazon.
Since you're referring to multiple snacks based on the previous sentence, use "them" instead of "it".
Feb. 27, 2026
Thank you for your very thorough correction.
There are still some unnatural expressions, but I feel like my grammar is improving little by little.
There are a variety of delicious-looking snacks. I'd like to try it someday.
Feb. 28, 2026
You're welcome.
I also eat snacks around 3 PM.
"Also" is used when you are providing additional information. This is the first piece of information, so "also" cannot be used.
I know it’s not good, but I can’t help but eat them.
There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releases appear one ofafter the other.
Snacks that tasted salty or which are made of rice flour are really manycommon in Japan.
What kind of snacks isare famous in your country?
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Great writing! This is very natural. Canada doesn't have a lot of famous snacks, but we do have maple syrup candy! It's mostly for tourists, but I like it too. We also have a cookie called "Fudgee-o" that you can't get elsewhere.
Feb. 27, 2026
Thank you for your very thorough correction.
There are still some unnatural expressions, but I feel like my grammar is improving little by little.
There are a variety of delicious-looking snacks. I'd like to try it someday.
There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releases appear one of the after another.
Snacks that tasted salty or are made of rice flour are really manyvery common in Japan.
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My favorite snack in my country is something called “piyaya” :)
Feb. 27, 2026
Thank you for your very thorough correction.
There are still some unnatural expressions, but I feel like my grammar is improving little by little.
There are a variety of delicious-looking snacks. I'd like to try it someday.
What is a habit you’d like to break?
I alwayso eat snacks around 3 PM.
I know it’s not good, but I can’t help but eat them.
There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releases appear one of the otherones are released every so often.
This is a more natural way to say it :)
Snacks tastedhat are salty or made of rice flour are really manycommon in Japan.
What kind of snacks isare famous in your country?
"Is" = one, "are" = more than one. Be careful with plurals!
I’ll look ithem up on Amazon.
Just a plural issue again. "It" = one, "them" = more than one!
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In my country, chips and lollies (candy) are popular. The most popular lollies are chocolate, gummies, and a powder called sherbert. It tastes a bit like oranges, and when you put it in your mouth, it fizzes. My favourite snacks are chips and popcorn because I don't like sweets much. I really like butter popcorn, and chips in interesting flavours like lime and chilli.
Feb. 27, 2026
Thank you for your very thorough correction.
There are still some unnatural expressions, but I feel like my grammar is improving little by little.
There are a variety of delicious-looking snacks. I'd like to try it someday.
March 1, 2026
Yeah, it's really hard to learn every little detail of natural writing, but you'll keep getting better! If you want some snack recommendations from Australia, we have a chocolate drink powder called Milo which is really nice, and famous cookies called Tim-Tams. I'm not certain which other snacks are unique to Australia, maybe Shapes (a savoury snack, barbeque is the best flavour. It's in a green box).
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I also eat snacks around 3 PM.
3 pm or am?
I know it’s not good, but I can’t help but eat them.
There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releases appear one of the othersnacks are frequently released.
This sounds more natural.
Snacks tasted salty oralty snacks or snacks made of rice flour are really manypopular in Japan.
What kind of snacks is famous in your country?
I’ll look it up on Amazon.
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There are local snacks and biscuits, sweet, soda, etc.
For natural local snacks, we have groundnuts (aka peanuts but we call it groundnuts), roasted plantain, roasted corn.
Flour made local snacks: fish pie, puff puff, buns, egg roll.
Among young generations, flour made snacks is more common. They do eat the natural snacks too but I'm not sure if it's that common, but I love them all 😅.
What is a habit you’d like to break?
I also eat snacks around 3 PM.
Removing the "also" because nothing came before this statement.
I know it’s not good, but I can’t help but eat them.
There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releasones appear one ofafter the other.
I wouldn't say "release" for something you'd eat. "Release" makes me think more of games and software.
Snacks tastedhat are salty or made of rice flour are really manyplentiful in Japan.
I would probably phrase this as: "There are many salty and rice flour snacks in Japan."
What kind of snacks isare famous in your country?
I’ll look it up on Amazon.
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In the United States, Twinkies (made by Hostess, I believe), are an iconic sugary treat. They're little, soft pastries filled with cream, and there's two tiny holes on the back where the cream is inserted in the factory. My family and I don't get them super often, but whenever we do, I've always loved toasting them. The pastry shell gets crispy and caramelizes just a little. The holes make it a little awkward to do that, though!
Apparently some people like deep frying them. Though, us Americans will deep fry just about anything, haha!
Feb. 27, 2026
Thank you for your very thorough correction.
There are still some unnatural expressions, but I feel like my grammar is improving little by little.
There are a variety of delicious-looking snacks. I'd like to try it someday.
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