June 1, 2021
Biological essentialism is a belief that an individual's personality or some specific quality is an innate and natrual essence, rather than changing by circumastances.
The sexual orientation is caused by a complex interplay of genetic, hormonal, and environmental influences. There are some researchs show that they born from this way. One is Twin studies. Scientists have found identical twins are more likely to have the same sexual orientation than non-identical twins. Another one is boys were surgically reassigned female, but they still consider themselves as men.
Apparently there are more studies on gay than other types. Ok, skip the complex introduction of chemical-biological terminology.
Childhood gender nonconformity is a strong predictor of adult sexual orientation. But what is interesting in the questionnaire is that many gays are reluctant to admit it. Because they believe that if they take female dress will face more peer pressure, and can not attract the same sex. I can identify with that. My biological sex is female, but I'm more boyish. All the girls around me dress up and enjoy wearing dresses. This makes me out of place and does put me under a lot of pressure.
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What is biological essentialism? How much of LGBTQIAN-ness comes from our bodies? When do our bodies interfere with living our authentic lives?
https://www.oxfordreference.com/view/10.1093/oi/authority.20110803095507973
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Biology_and_sexual_orientation
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Biological essentialism is athe belief that an individual's personality or some specific quality is an innate and natrural essence, rather than changing by circumastances.
The sSexual orientation is caused by a complex interplay of genetic, hormonal, and environmental influences.
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1) You can either say "There is some research..." or "There are some studies...", but you can't say "There are some researchs."
2) I changed the end of your sentence to make it more specific, since you didn't identify before in your paragraph who "they" is and what "born from this way" means.
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Scientists have found that identical twins are more likely to have the same sexual orientation than non-identical twins.
Another one is boys were surgically reassigned female, but they still consider themselves as men.
This sentence sounds odd because it doesn't really sound like it fits here. Do you want to try to rewrite it and I can correct it?
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What does "it" refer to here? Childhood gender nonconformity? Or something else?
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Be careful when you start a sentence with the word "because". Most of the time, it will sound odd.
I think it sounds better if you combine this sentence with the last sentence. Obviously, if you combine the two sentences, you can leave the word "because" in, since that will be your transition word.
I can identify with that.
My biological sex is female, but I'm more boyish.
All the girls around me dress up and enjoy wearing dresses.
This makes me out of place and does put me under a lot of pressure.
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Biological essentialism is a belief that an individual's personality or some specific quality is an innate and natrual essence, rather than changing by circumastances. Biological essentialism is |
The sexual orientation is caused by a complex interplay of genetic, hormonal, and environmental influences.
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There are some researchs show that they born from this way. There 1) You can either say "There is some research..." or "There are some studies...", but you can't say "There are some researchs." 2) I changed the end of your sentence to make it more specific, since you didn't identify before in your paragraph who "they" is and what "born from this way" means. |
One is Twin studies.
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Scientists have found identical twins are more likely to have the same sexual orientation than non-identical twins. Scientists have found that identical twins are more likely to have the same sexual orientation than non-identical twins. |
Another one is boys were surgically reassigned female, but they still consider themselves as men. Another one is boys were surgically reassigned female, but they still consider themselves as men. This sentence sounds odd because it doesn't really sound like it fits here. Do you want to try to rewrite it and I can correct it? |
Apparently there are more studies on gay than other types. Apparently. there are more studies on |
Ok, skip the complex introduction of chemical-biological terminology. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Childhood gender nonconformity is a strong predictor of adult sexual orientation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
But what is interesting in the questionnaire is that many gays are reluctant to admit it.
What does "it" refer to here? Childhood gender nonconformity? Or something else? |
Because they believe that if they take female dress will face more peer pressure, and can not attract the same sex.
Be careful when you start a sentence with the word "because". Most of the time, it will sound odd. I think it sounds better if you combine this sentence with the last sentence. Obviously, if you combine the two sentences, you can leave the word "because" in, since that will be your transition word. |
I can identify with that. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
My biological sex is female, but I'm more boyish. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
All the girls around me dress up and enjoy wearing dresses. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
This makes me out of place and does put me under a lot of pressure. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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