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alexwong2164

May 25, 2021

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No hands, Think Only

https://www.nature.com/articles/nature04968


I remember a movie scene that you can see everyone’s thinking.

At top of each people’s head has a text box, you can see what is inside their mind.

That was only a movie!

But now according to this article.

Maybe few years later we don’t even need to use our hand to write!

What do you think?

I don’t like it at all!

Tomorrow will be the last day of a local robot exhibition.

I wonder will able to see such theology?

Corrections

No hands, Tthink Oing only.

https://www.nature.com/articles/nature04968

I remember a movie scene thatwhere you canould see everyone’s thinkingoughts.

AtOn top of each people’rson's head hwas a text box, so you canould see what iwas inside their mind.

That was only a movie!

But now according to this article.

This isn't a sentence, you need to elaborate. Also, 'but' is not an acceptable sentence starter. It is grammatically incorrect.

Maybe a few years later we dwon't even need to use our hand to write!

What do you think?

I don’t like it at all!

Tomorrow will be the last day of a local robot exhibition.

I wonder if I will be able to see such thechnology?

Feedback

Try to make your tenses consistent. Also, maybe work on word choice.

No hands, Think Only


No hands, Tthink Oing only.

https://www.nature.com/articles/nature04968


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I remember a movie scene that you can see everyone’s thinking.


I remember a movie scene thatwhere you canould see everyone’s thinkingoughts.

At top of each people’s head has a text box, you can see what is inside their mind.


AtOn top of each people’rson's head hwas a text box, so you canould see what iwas inside their mind.

That was only a movie!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But now according to this article.


But now according to this article.

This isn't a sentence, you need to elaborate. Also, 'but' is not an acceptable sentence starter. It is grammatically incorrect.

Maybe few years later we don’t even need to use our hand to write!


Maybe a few years later we dwon't even need to use our hand to write!

What do you think?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don’t like it at all!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Tomorrow will be the last day of a local robot exhibition.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wonder will able to see such theology?


I wonder if I will be able to see such thechnology?

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