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JAVIER_MARTINEZ

Sept. 2, 2025

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Hi everyone. I have written nothing since I realised that I was sleeping poorly due to this website. Since I stopped posting, I sleep much better.
I'm going to have a try and see if I can use this website and sleep well at the same time.
I want to talk about how my weekend went. My hole family and I went to a cottage this weekend and we had a really good time there.
However, as we don't usually see these members of our family, we don't know each other at all. I mean that all of us might have changed a lot since the last time we met.

Anyway, everything went really well. However, I'm really dissapointed with my cousin Marta. The last time I saw her, she was a good girl, although a little bit creepy. Now, she's rude, unpleasant and, if that weren't enough, creepier. She's not such a child that we tolerate that kind of behaviors.
I know that Marta isn't living through a good moment in her life but that's not an excuse. She should be polite at least.

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My whole (or entire) family and I went to a cottage this weekend and we had a really good time there.

She's not such a child that we. Therefore, we don't tolerate that kind of behaviors.

I know that Marta isn't liv going through a good momentdifficult time in her life, but that's not an excuse.

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B2? This is written better than most high school kids in the United States.

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JAVIER_MARTINEZ

Sept. 4, 2025

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Thank you so much for your feedback. I'm so grateful for your words.

News from my life


Hi everyone.


I have written nothing since I realised that I was sleeping poorly due to this website.


Since I stopped posting, I sleep much better.


I'm going to have a try and see if I can use this website and sleep well at the same time.


I want to talk about how my weekend went.


My hole family and I went to a cottage this weekend and we had a really good time there.


My whole (or entire) family and I went to a cottage this weekend and we had a really good time there.

However, as we don't usually see these members of our family, we don't know each other at all.


I mean that all of us might have changed a lot since the last time we met.


Anyway, everything went really well.


However, I'm really dissapointed with my cousin Marta.


The last time I saw her, she was a good girl, although a little bit creepy.


Now, she's rude, unpleasant and, if that weren't enough, creepier.


She's not such a child that we tolerate that kind of behaviors.


She's not such a child that we. Therefore, we don't tolerate that kind of behaviors.

I know that Marta isn't living through a good moment in her life but that's not an excuse.


I know that Marta isn't liv going through a good momentdifficult time in her life, but that's not an excuse.

She should be polite at least.


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