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Beha_lau

June 17, 2025

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News about how change your life

I read an article in english.

This article explains how change your life because too many people feel scared to change. They wait and wait always despite theirs dreams.
Theys think too much and do nothing. They wait the best time. The topic's best council, is : To do now, maybe it a small thing, maybe it a bad firt, but it is important that you move and that you start. I think, what is the thing i don't make because i feel scared. In the first Time, i did not know, because i have a several challenge in same time, for example : Writting a script and after i search investisment to make, i play alone on scene, etc .. But, there are différent situation where i wait, it is when i think that i am not perfect. For exemple, dancing front everybody.

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News abouton how to change your life

I read an article in eEnglish.

This article explains how to change your life because too many people feel scared to change.

They always wait and wait always despite theirs dreams.

Theys think too much and do nothing.

They wait for the best time.

The topic/page's best council,advice is : Tto do now, mit now. Maybe it's a small thing, maybe it's a bad firattempt, but it is important that you move and that you start.

I think, w that is the thing i don't makereason I don't do things is because iI feel scared.

In theAt first Time, iI did not know, because iI have ad several challenge ins at same time, for example : Wwritting a script and after i search, searching for investisments to make, i playing alone oin a scene, etc ..

Didn't really understand this, sorry

But, there are difféerent situations where iI wait, it isand they are when iI think that iI am not perfect.

For exeample, dancing in front of everybody.

This article explains how to change your life becauseand that too many people feel scared to change.

They wait and wait alwaysare always waiting despite theirs dreams.

Sounds more natural

Theys think too much and do nothing.

They wait for the best timemoment.

Moment is a better word to use in this context

The topicarticle's best council, is : To doadvice is to do something now, m. Maybe its a small thing, maybe it afeels bad at first, but it is important that you move and that you start.

I thinkought to myself, what is the thing iI don't makedo because iI feel scared.

Change think to thought if it was an action that happend in the past

In theAt first Time, iI did not know, because iI have a several challenge in same time, fproblems right now. For example : W, writting a script and after i , researching investisments to make, i playing alone on scene, etc ...

Right now means in this moment, it is better to use in this sentence and still shows they are happening at the same time

But, tThere are différent situations where iI wait, it is when i because I think that iI am not perfectgood enough.

Perfect makes sense but good enough is usually used when someone is saying this

For exeample, dancing in front everybody.

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Goof job, keep going :)

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azapa0822

June 18, 2025

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*good

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Beha_lau

June 20, 2025

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Whaou, Your correction is very good. Thank you.

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Thisat article explains edhow change your life because too many people feel scared tof change.

They wait and wait always despite theirs dreamsMost people procrastinate, despite wanting to change their behavior.

TheysGenerally, the majority of people think too much and do nothing.

TheyMORE NATURALLY: They use excuses such as, "I will wait thefor best time."

The topic's best council, is : To do now, maybe MY GUESS: The advice I heard is to do start doing things now. You can start with a small thing, maybe it a bad firt, but. However, it is important that you move and that you start taking action.

I think, what is the thing i don't makDespite that realization, I remain immobile because iI feel scared.

In the first Time, i did not know, because i have a several challenge in same time, for example : Writting a script and after i search investisment to make, i play alone on scene, etc ..NOTE: I could not understand this sentence. Could you write this in your native language?

ButHowever, there are différentsome situations where in I wait, it is when i. Perhaps I hesitate because I think that iI am not perfect.

For exeample, I am shy about dancing in front of everybody.

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Yes, it takes courage to make deep changes.

News about how to change your life

I read an article in english.

They wait and wait always despite theirs dreams.

Theys think too much and do nothing.

They wait for the best time.

The topic's best council, is : To do it now, maybe it is a small thing, maybe it ais bad at first, but it is important that you move and that you start.

I think, what is the thing iI don't makedo because iI feel scared.

In tThe first Ttime, iI did not know, because iI have ad several challenge ins at the same time, f. For example : W, writting a script and after iI searched investisment to make, iI play alone on scene, etc ..

I am not sure what word you were going for with "investisment."

But, there are difféerent situations where iI wait, it is when iI think that iI am not perfect.

English does not use accent marks. The letter "i" is always capitalized when it is used to reference the person talking (I walk my dog. The girl and I ran. I am hungry.).

For exemple, dancing front everybody.

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Great job. I understood most of it.

News about how change your life


News about how to change your life

News abouton how to change your life

I read an article in english.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I read an article in englishMORE NATURALLY: Recently I read an article in English.¶
MORE CONCISELY: Recently I read an English article
.

I read an article in eEnglish.

For exemple, dancing front everybody.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For exeample, I am shy about dancing in front of everybody.

For exeample, dancing in front everybody.

For exeample, dancing in front of everybody.

In the first Time, i did not know, because i have a several challenge in same time, for example : Writting a script and after i search investisment to make, i play alone on scene, etc ..


In tThe first Ttime, iI did not know, because iI have ad several challenge ins at the same time, f. For example : W, writting a script and after iI searched investisment to make, iI play alone on scene, etc ..

I am not sure what word you were going for with "investisment."

In the first Time, i did not know, because i have a several challenge in same time, for example : Writting a script and after i search investisment to make, i play alone on scene, etc ..NOTE: I could not understand this sentence. Could you write this in your native language?

In theAt first Time, iI did not know, because iI have a several challenge in same time, fproblems right now. For example : W, writting a script and after i , researching investisments to make, i playing alone on scene, etc ...

Right now means in this moment, it is better to use in this sentence and still shows they are happening at the same time

In theAt first Time, iI did not know, because iI have ad several challenge ins at same time, for example : Wwritting a script and after i search, searching for investisments to make, i playing alone oin a scene, etc ..

Didn't really understand this, sorry

But, there are différent situation where i wait, it is when i think that i am not perfect.


But, there are difféerent situations where iI wait, it is when iI think that iI am not perfect.

English does not use accent marks. The letter "i" is always capitalized when it is used to reference the person talking (I walk my dog. The girl and I ran. I am hungry.).

ButHowever, there are différentsome situations where in I wait, it is when i. Perhaps I hesitate because I think that iI am not perfect.

But, tThere are différent situations where iI wait, it is when i because I think that iI am not perfectgood enough.

Perfect makes sense but good enough is usually used when someone is saying this

But, there are difféerent situations where iI wait, it isand they are when iI think that iI am not perfect.

This article explains how change your life because too many people feel scared to change.


Thisat article explains edhow change your life because too many people feel scared tof change.

This article explains how to change your life becauseand that too many people feel scared to change.

This article explains how to change your life because too many people feel scared to change.

They wait and wait always despite theirs dreams.


They wait and wait always despite theirs dreams.

They wait and wait always despite theirs dreamsMost people procrastinate, despite wanting to change their behavior.

They wait and wait alwaysare always waiting despite theirs dreams.

Sounds more natural

They always wait and wait always despite theirs dreams.

Theys think too much and do nothing.


Theys think too much and do nothing.

TheysGenerally, the majority of people think too much and do nothing.

Theys think too much and do nothing.

Theys think too much and do nothing.

They wait the best time.


They wait for the best time.

TheyMORE NATURALLY: They use excuses such as, "I will wait thefor best time."

They wait for the best timemoment.

Moment is a better word to use in this context

They wait for the best time.

The topic's best council, is : To do now, maybe it a small thing, maybe it a bad firt, but it is important that you move and that you start.


The topic's best council, is : To do it now, maybe it is a small thing, maybe it ais bad at first, but it is important that you move and that you start.

The topic's best council, is : To do now, maybe MY GUESS: The advice I heard is to do start doing things now. You can start with a small thing, maybe it a bad firt, but. However, it is important that you move and that you start taking action.

The topicarticle's best council, is : To doadvice is to do something now, m. Maybe its a small thing, maybe it afeels bad at first, but it is important that you move and that you start.

The topic/page's best council,advice is : Tto do now, mit now. Maybe it's a small thing, maybe it's a bad firattempt, but it is important that you move and that you start.

I think, what is the thing i don't make because i feel scared.


I think, what is the thing iI don't makedo because iI feel scared.

I think, what is the thing i don't makDespite that realization, I remain immobile because iI feel scared.

I thinkought to myself, what is the thing iI don't makedo because iI feel scared.

Change think to thought if it was an action that happend in the past

I think, w that is the thing i don't makereason I don't do things is because iI feel scared.

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