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New Year's Day Shopping

Yesterday, my family and I went to a humongous outlet shopping mall in the suburbs. It was extremely crowded. There wasn't even a parking spot, and we queued for ages to park. We popped into several shops, and found the stuff there wasn't cheap. Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just because it was the New Year's Day.

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Shopping on New Year's Day Shopping

Yesterday, my family and I went to a humongn enormous outlet shopping mall in the suburbs.

It was extremely crowded.

There wasn't even a parking spot, and we queued for ages to park.

We popped into several shops, and found that the stuff there wasn't cheap.

Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just because it was the New Year's Day.

Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just because it was the New Year's Day.

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New Year's Days Shopping

Yesterday, my family and I went to a humongous outlet shopping mall in the suburbs.

It was extremely crowded.

There wasn't even a parking spot, and we queued for ages to park.

We popped intovisited several shops, and found that the stuff there wasn't cheap.

Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just becaussince it was the New Year's Days.

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Vinson

Jan. 2, 2026

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New Year's Day Shopping

Yesterday, my family and I went to a humongous outlet shopping mall outlet in the suburbs.

It was extremely crowded.

There wasn't even a parking spot, and we queuwaited for ages to park.

Queued is good vocab, but pretty unnatural here

We popped into several shops, and found the stuff there wasn't cheap.

Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just because it was the New Year's Day.

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Yesterday, my family and I went to a humongous outlet shopping mall in the suburbs.


Yesterday, my family and I went to a humongous outlet shopping mall outlet in the suburbs.

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Yesterday, my family and I went to a humongn enormous outlet shopping mall in the suburbs.

It was extremely crowded.


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There wasn't even a parking spot, and we queued for ages to park.


There wasn't even a parking spot, and we queuwaited for ages to park.

Queued is good vocab, but pretty unnatural here

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We popped into several shops, and found the stuff there wasn't cheap.


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We popped intovisited several shops, and found that the stuff there wasn't cheap.

We popped into several shops, and found that the stuff there wasn't cheap.

Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just because it was the New Year's Day.


Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just because it was the New Year's Day.

Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just becaussince it was the New Year's Days.

Even so, we decided to buy some clothes for each member of our family, just because it was the New Year's Day.

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