June 21, 2025
New Router, Less Distracctions
I've borrowed a spare router that my father in law wasn't using.
It has all the features that I was looking, Today, I've just finished setting it up, and now I'm using my willpower to create things, instead of resisting the urge to consume content.
New Router, Less Distracctions
I've borrowed a spare router that my father -in -law wasn't using.
It has all the features that I was looking, Today, I've for, and I just finished setting it up, and n today. Now I'm using my willpower to create things, instead of resisting the urge to consume content.
There are other ways that this could be revised, but this way separates a somewhat crowded sentence into more manageable chunks. You kinda had four ideas in the initial sentence:
1. it has features
2. you set it up
3. you´re creating thing
4. you´re not having to resist urges
My revision keeps 1 and 2 together (since they´re about the router) and 3 and 4 together (since they´re about willpower).
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You´re doing well tracking the development of your "fight." Nice job!
New Router, Less Distracctions
It's not uncommon to say "less" in daily conversation but technically the grammatically correct term is "fewer" since "distractions" is countable (with an 's'). "Less" is for uncountable terms (less time, less water etc.) So for example, it's less water but fewer liters of water.
I've borrowed a spare router that my father in law wasn't using.
It has all the features that I was looking, for. Today, I've just finished setting it up, and now I'm using my willpower to create things, instead of resisting the urge to consume content.
New Router, Less Distracctions
It has all the features that I was looking, for. Today, I've just finished setting it up, and now I'm using my willpower to create things, instead of resisting the urge to consume content.
New Router, LessFewer Distracctions
"Less" is used for uncountable nouns and "fewer" is used for countable nouns. In practice, however, you'll often see native speakers use "less" for all nouns because not everyone is aware of the difference.
I've borrowed a spare router that my father -in -law wasn't using.
It has all the features that I was looking, for. Today, I've just finished setting it up, and now I'm using my willpowerdetermination to create things, instead ofrather than having to resisting the urge to consume content.
The second sentence isn't grammatically wrong, but I tried to phrase it in a more natural-sounding way.
I've borrowed a spare router that my father -in -law wasn't using.
It has all the features that I was looking,. Today, I've just finished setting it up, and now I'm using my will power to create things, instead of resisting the urge to consume content.
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New Router, Less Distracctions New Router, "Less" is used for uncountable nouns and "fewer" is used for countable nouns. In practice, however, you'll often see native speakers use "less" for all nouns because not everyone is aware of the difference. New Router, Less Distrac New Router, Less Distrac It's not uncommon to say "less" in daily conversation but technically the grammatically correct term is "fewer" since "distractions" is countable (with an 's'). "Less" is for uncountable terms (less time, less water etc.) So for example, it's less water but fewer liters of water. New Router, Less Distrac |
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It has all the features that I was looking, Today, I've just finished setting it up, and now I'm using my willpower to create things, instead of resisting the urge to consume content. It has all the features that I was looking The second sentence isn't grammatically wrong, but I tried to phrase it in a more natural-sounding way. It has all the features that I was looking It has all the features that I was looking It has all the features that I was looking It has all the features that I was looking There are other ways that this could be revised, but this way separates a somewhat crowded sentence into more manageable chunks. You kinda had four ideas in the initial sentence: 1. it has features 2. you set it up 3. you´re creating thing 4. you´re not having to resist urges My revision keeps 1 and 2 together (since they´re about the router) and 3 and 4 together (since they´re about willpower). |
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