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May 11, 2021

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New beginnings of my life

I am a law student at the university and I hope I am going to graduate end of this semester. That's why I'm really happy so much. In Turkey after law school, the graduated students have to do an internship for one year to be a lawyer. And for a long time I have searched good law office for my legal internship. But for this kind of offices a successful cv is required. And of course our interview has to go well. I have had many interviews with the law offices in the last month. And finally a big and international law firm accepted my internship application. Now I'm really on a cloud. But there is a problem. In the four months I have to improve my English to high level. It's so crucial for this job. And I don't want to lose this job in the coming years.

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New beginnings ofin my life

I am a law student at the university and I hope I am going to graduate at the end of this semester.

That's why I'm really happy so much.

could also say "that's why I'm so happy"

In Turkey, after law school, the graduated students have to do an internship for one year to become a lawyer.

And fFor a long time I have searched for a good law office for my legal internship.

But for thisese kind of offices a successful cvCV is required.

And of course our interview has to go well.

I have had many interviews with the law offices in the last month.

And fFinally, a big and, international law firm accepted my internship application.

Now I'm really on a cloud nine.

Could use various idioms, but I don't think "on a cloud" by itself works in either British or American English.

But there is a problem.

In the four months, I have to improve my English to a high level.

It's so crucial for this job.

And I don't want to lose this job in the coming years.

New bBeginnings of mMy lLife

Titles are mostly capitalized

I am a law student at the university and I hope I am going to graduate at the end of this semester.

That's why I'm really happy so muchso happy.

In Turkey after law school, the graduated students have to do an internship for one year to become a lawyer.

graduated students is also understandable

And for a long time I have searched for a good law office for my legal internship.

But for thisese kinds of offices a successful cvn impressive CV is required.

successful CV also works, but impressive sounds better

And of course ourthe interview has to go well.

our interview works, but I think the interview sounds more natural

I have had many interviews with the law offices in the last month.

And finally a big and international law firm has accepted my internship application.!

Now I'm really on a cloud nine.

cloud nine is idiomatic

But there is a problem.

In the next four months I have to improve my English to a high level.

It's so crucial for this job.

And I don't want to lose this job in the coming years.

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Good luck! Keep posting here and your English writing will improve in no time.

Although, your level is definitely higher than your profile shows :)

New beginnings of my life


New bBeginnings of mMy lLife

Titles are mostly capitalized

New beginnings ofin my life

I am a law student at the university and I hope I am going to graduate end of this semester.


I am a law student at the university and I hope I am going to graduate at the end of this semester.

I am a law student at the university and I hope I am going to graduate at the end of this semester.

That's why I'm really happy so much.


That's why I'm really happy so muchso happy.

That's why I'm really happy so much.

could also say "that's why I'm so happy"

In Turkey after law school, the graduated students have to do an internship for one year to be a lawyer.


In Turkey, after law school, the graduated students have to do an internship for one year to become a lawyer.

In Turkey after law school, the graduated students have to do an internship for one year to become a lawyer.

graduated students is also understandable

And for a long time I have searched good law office for my legal internship.


And for a long time I have searched for a good law office for my legal internship.

And fFor a long time I have searched for a good law office for my legal internship.

But for this kind of offices a successful cv is required.


But for thisese kinds of offices a successful cvn impressive CV is required.

successful CV also works, but impressive sounds better

But for thisese kind of offices a successful cvCV is required.

And of course our interview has to go well.


And of course ourthe interview has to go well.

our interview works, but I think the interview sounds more natural

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I have had many interviews with the law offices in the last month.


I have had many interviews with the law offices in the last month.

I have had many interviews with the law offices in the last month.

And finally a big and international law firm accepted my internship application.


And finally a big and international law firm has accepted my internship application.!

And fFinally, a big and, international law firm accepted my internship application.

Now I'm really on a cloud.


Now I'm really on a cloud nine.

cloud nine is idiomatic

Now I'm really on a cloud nine.

Could use various idioms, but I don't think "on a cloud" by itself works in either British or American English.

But there is a problem.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the four months I have to improve my English to high level.


In the next four months I have to improve my English to a high level.

In the four months, I have to improve my English to a high level.

It's so crucial for this job.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And I don't want to lose this job in the coming years.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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