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March 19, 2021

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Never give up

Hi guys, today I'd like to say how the situation is in Ecuador with the weather. Currently it's raining a lot. People with low resources have a lot of inconveniences because the water is entering the houses. At the same time, it is most difficult to work. That's a pity. I almost forgot that also a few days ago a volcano entered an eruption which caused the sky to be black in the morning. I'm fine, but always I remember these news. I know that are difficult days, but we never gave up.

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Hi guys, today I'd like to say how the situation is in Ecuador with the weathetalk about the weather condition in Ecuador.

Currently it's raining a lot.

People withho are low on resources have a lot offind it inconveniencest because the water is enterings the houses.

At the same time, it is most(very) difficult to work.

That'It’s a pity.

I(Also,) I’ve almost forgotten that also a few days ago a volcano entered an eruptioned, which caused the sky to beturn black in the morning.

I'm fine, but I always I rememberthink about these news.

I know that these are difficult days, but we never gaive up.

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Great job!

Never give up

Hi guys, today I'd like to saytalk about how the situation is in Ecuador with the weather is in Ecuador.

The original sentence is correct but would sound a little more natural like this, in my opinion

Currently it's raining a lot.

People with lofew resources have a lot of inconveniences because the water is entering their houses.

At the same time, it is mostreally difficult to work.

"Most difficult" isn't incorrect but it sounds a bit unnatural/old-fashioned

ThaIt's a pity.

I almost forgot that also a few days ago a volcano entered an eruptionrupted, too, which caused the sky to beturn black in the morning.

I'm fine, but I'm always I remember thesethinking about this news.

or "I can't forget"

I know that these are difficult days, but we'll never gaive up.

Since the situation is ongoing, the second part of the sentence should be in present or future tense, not past.

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Well done! :)

Never give up


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Hi guys, today I'd like to say how the situation is in Ecuador with the weather.


Hi guys, today I'd like to saytalk about how the situation is in Ecuador with the weather is in Ecuador.

The original sentence is correct but would sound a little more natural like this, in my opinion

Hi guys, today I'd like to say how the situation is in Ecuador with the weathetalk about the weather condition in Ecuador.

Currently it's raining a lot.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

People with low resources have a lot of inconveniences because the water is entering the houses.


People with lofew resources have a lot of inconveniences because the water is entering their houses.

People withho are low on resources have a lot offind it inconveniencest because the water is enterings the houses.

At the same time, it is most difficult to work.


At the same time, it is mostreally difficult to work.

"Most difficult" isn't incorrect but it sounds a bit unnatural/old-fashioned

At the same time, it is most(very) difficult to work.

That's a pity.


ThaIt's a pity.

That'It’s a pity.

I almost forgot that also a few days ago a volcano entered an eruption which caused the sky to be black in the morning.


I almost forgot that also a few days ago a volcano entered an eruptionrupted, too, which caused the sky to beturn black in the morning.

I(Also,) I’ve almost forgotten that also a few days ago a volcano entered an eruptioned, which caused the sky to beturn black in the morning.

I'm fine, but always I remember these news.


I'm fine, but I'm always I remember thesethinking about this news.

or "I can't forget"

I'm fine, but I always I rememberthink about these news.

I know that are difficult days, but we never gave up.


I know that these are difficult days, but we'll never gaive up.

Since the situation is ongoing, the second part of the sentence should be in present or future tense, not past.

I know that these are difficult days, but we never gaive up.

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