April 10, 2025
Netherland ban the New year´s fireworks but not yet
I just to read a articule where it said that , Dutch vote to ban New year´s fireworks but not yet . This can seem so interesting , since no one believes that the firewprñs can be dangerous , as they are using for celebrated anything , for example : New year , 4 of July or just the national day of any country . But , by i can read , both Nertherland , Belgicam and Germany . They had been seening the fireworks like a kind of weapon , because , many people has died for these , and other people has get out injured.
Apart from other reason , for example , broke cars , stolen some store or only do vandalism , is for that , the Durch goverment have been thinking to ban the fireworks since 2026.
On the other hand , the half of the locals are agreed to ban this dangerous object , for intance : the polices , because , in several times , they have said that they were seem to be in a war when they tried to stop the vandalism in the street , but , the other half of the locals decline to ban the fireworks , owing to they are knows for everybody of their beutiful and huge fireworks .
I would like know , what are you think about that ?
Do you ban the fireworks in your country ? why?
I just to read an articule where it said that , “Dutch vote to ban New year´s fireworks but not yet ”.
There isn’t a space before a comma. There is just one space after. I’ve used quote marks before the article ‘said’ something
This can seem so interesting , sincebecause no one believes that the firewprñorks can be dangerous , as t. They are using for celebrateding anything , f. For example :- New year , 4the 4th of July , or just the national day of any country .
If a sentence of over 5 lines then it’s to long to and difficult to read. I’ve broken this down into smaller sentence
But , by i can read , bothHowever, I have read that Nertherland s, Belgicaum and Germany .
‘Both’ always refers to two things. You listed three countries so ‘both’ is incorrect to use
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Apart from other reason s, for example , broken cars , stolen some robbed stores or only do vandalism , is forare reasons that , the Durtch government haves been thinking to ban theabout banning fireworks since 2026.
‘Since’ refers to the past. So we can’t say ‘since 2026’ as it hasn’t happened yet
On the other hand , the, half of the locals are agreed to banning this dangerous object. , for instance : the polices , because , in several times , they have said that they were seem to be in a war when they triedy to stop the vandalism in the street , but , t. The other half of the locals declineon’t want to ban the fireworks , owing to they are knows for everybodybecause everyone know of their beautiful and huge fireworks .
I would like know , what are you think about that ?
Do you ban the fireworks in your country ?
wWhy?
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Well done. That’s a tricky subject to write about. Be care about spaces around punctuation. You had lots of extra spaces that you didn’t need.
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Netherland ban the New year´s fireworks but not yet |
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I just to read a articule where it said that , Dutch vote to ban New year´s fireworks but not yet . I just There isn’t a space before a comma. There is just one space after. I’ve used quote marks before the article ‘said’ something |
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This can seem so interesting , since no one believes that the firewprñs can be dangerous , as they are using for celebrated anything , for example : New year , 4 of July or just the national day of any country . This can seem so interesting If a sentence of over 5 lines then it’s to long to and difficult to read. I’ve broken this down into smaller sentence |
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But , by i can read , both Nertherland , Belgicam and Germany .
‘Both’ always refers to two things. You listed three countries so ‘both’ is incorrect to use |
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They had been seening the fireworks like a kind of weapon , because , many people has died for these , and other people has get out injured. They |
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On the other hand , the half of the locals are agreed to ban this dangerous object , for intance : the polices , because , in several times , they have said that they were seem to be in a war when they tried to stop the vandalism in the street , but , the other half of the locals decline to ban the fireworks , owing to they are knows for everybody of their beutiful and huge fireworks . On the other hand |
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I would like know , what are you think about that ? I would like know |
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Do you ban the fireworks in your country ? Do you ban |
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why?
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Apart from other reason , for example , broke cars , stolen some store or only do vandalism , is for that , the Durch goverment have been thinking to ban the fireworks since 2026. Apart from other reason ‘Since’ refers to the past. So we can’t say ‘since 2026’ as it hasn’t happened yet |
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