June 21, 2025
Need help to improve English
Hello everyone,
My name is Mai. I am a Vietnamese woman living in Houston, Texas, USA. Although I have been learning English for many years, my English is not good. Maybe it's because I don't have the right method.
Today, I had a conversation with ChatGPT, which helped me build a detailed plan to improve my English.
The first step is writing every day.
This paragraph is my first writing exercise. I hope I can get help from the native people.
Greatly appreciate your help!
Mai
Xin chào các bạn,
Tôi là Mai, một phụ nữ Việt Nam đang sống tại Houston, Texas, Hoa Kỳ. Tiếng Anh của tôi không tốt, mặc dù tôi đã học tiếng Anh trong nhiều năm rồi. Có lẽ bởi vì tôi chưa tìm được phương pháp đúng.
Hôm nay, tôi đã hỏi ChatGPT và được ChatGPT giúp tôi lập một kế hoạch chi tiết để rèn luyện tiếng Anh.
Bước đầu tiên của kế hoạch là rèn luyện khả năng viết mỗi ngày.
Đoạn văn này là bài tập viết đầu tiên của tôi. Tôi mong rằng sẽ nhận được hỗ trợ từ các bạn người bản xứ.
Chân thành cảm ơn các bạn!
Mai
Hello everyone,
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My name is Mai.
I guess the intent here is to go for an opening like writing a letter, where you would end the greeting with a comma and the first line with a capital. But this site will combine the two lines into one unless you hit enter twice (and also, people normally don't start internet posts like letters).
I am a Vietnamese woman living in Houston, Texas(, USA).
If you say Texas, basically all native English speakers will know you mean Texas, USA, so it's more natural to omit it (the same is true for some but not all US states).
I hope I can get help from the native people.
Feedback
Pretty good! I made a couple of style corrections but it was perfectly clear.
June 22, 2025
Thank you so much for your helpful correction, Araigoshi!
Need help to improve English
Hello everyone, My name is Mai.
I am a Vietnamese woman living in Houston, Texas, USA.
Although I have been learning English for many years, my English is not good.
Maybe it's because I don't have the right method.
Today, I had a conversation with ChatGPT, which helped me build a detailed plan to improve my English.
The first step is writing every day.
This paragraph is my first writing exercise.
I hope I can get help from the native speopleakers.
GI greatly appreciate your help!
Mai
Need help to improve English
Hello everyone, My name is Mai.
I am a Vietnamese woman living in Houston, Texas, USA.
Although I have been learning English for many years, my English is not good.
Today, I had a conversation with ChatGPT, which helped me build a detailed plan to improve my English.
The first step is writing every day.
This paragraph is my first writing exercise.
I hope I can get help from the native people.
GI greatly appreciate your help!
MIt may be it's because I don't have the right method.
I hope I can get help from the native peopleEnglish speakers.
GI greatly appreciate your help in advance!
Feedback
This was already in great shape! I just made a few suggestions.
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Today, I had a conversation with ChatGPT, which helped me build a detailed plan to improve my English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The first step is writing every day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Hello everyone, My name is Mai. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! Hello everyone, I guess the intent here is to go for an opening like writing a letter, where you would end the greeting with a comma and the first line with a capital. But this site will combine the two lines into one unless you hit enter twice (and also, people normally don't start internet posts like letters). |
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I am a Vietnamese woman living in Houston, Texas, USA. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! I am a Vietnamese woman living in Houston, Texas(, USA). If you say Texas, basically all native English speakers will know you mean Texas, USA, so it's more natural to omit it (the same is true for some but not all US states). |
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Although I have been learning English for many years, my English is not good. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe it's because I don't have the right method.
This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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