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llimas

Jan. 4, 2025

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My wife's birthday

Today is my wife birthday, as usual I buy a cake for her in this date.
I don't know how to make a delicious cake like this one that I bought, for this reason I prefer to buy the cake than try making by my own.
I ordered the cake sending text messages to the cake store. They asked me about what hour I was planning to take the cake and I scheduled to be there at 2pm.
The cake cost 20 dollars.


Hoje é o aniversário da minha esposa, como de costume, eu compro um bolo para ela nessa data.
Eu não sei fazer um bolo delicioso como esse que eu comprei, por essa rasão eu prefiro comprar o bolo do que tentar fazelo eu mesmo.
Eu fiz o pedido do bolo enviado menssagens de texto a loja de bolos. Eles me perguntaram que horas eu estava planejando de pegar o bolo e eu agendei para estar lá as 14h.
O bolo custou 20 dolares.

Corrections

Today is my wife's birthday, as usual I buy a cake for her ion this date.

I don't know how to make a delicious cake like thise one that I bought, f. For this reason, I prefer to buy the cake than try making byan make my own.

I ordered the cake by sending a text messages to the cbake storery.

They asked me about what hourwhen I was planning to takepick up the cake and, so I scheduled to be there at 2pm.

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llimas

Jan. 5, 2025

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Thank you :)

My wife's birthday

Today is my wife's birthday, asI usual Ily buy a cake for her ion this date.

'on this date' does not sound natural but is grammatically correct. I'd rephrase the whole sentence.

I don't know how to make a delicious cake like this one that I bought, for this reason I prefer to buy the cake than to try making by my owne one myself.

We might want to say 'a cake as delicious as this one' but it depends on what exactly you mean.

I ordered the cake sending text messages to the cake storfrom the bakery by text message.

The sentence was totally intelligible but this is a more natural way to say it.

They asked me about what hour Iwhat time was I planning to takecollect the cake at and I scheduled to be there at 2pm.

The cake cost 20 dollars.

llimas's avatar
llimas

Jan. 5, 2025

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Thank you :)

My wife's birthday


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Today is my wife birthday, as usual I buy a cake for her in this date.


Today is my wife's birthday, asI usual Ily buy a cake for her ion this date.

'on this date' does not sound natural but is grammatically correct. I'd rephrase the whole sentence.

Today is my wife's birthday, as usual I buy a cake for her ion this date.

I don't know how to make a delicious cake like this one that I bought, for this reason I prefer to buy the cake than try making by my own.


I don't know how to make a delicious cake like this one that I bought, for this reason I prefer to buy the cake than to try making by my owne one myself.

We might want to say 'a cake as delicious as this one' but it depends on what exactly you mean.

I don't know how to make a delicious cake like thise one that I bought, f. For this reason, I prefer to buy the cake than try making byan make my own.

I ordered the cake sending text messages to the cake store.


I ordered the cake sending text messages to the cake storfrom the bakery by text message.

The sentence was totally intelligible but this is a more natural way to say it.

I ordered the cake by sending a text messages to the cbake storery.

They asked me about what hour I was planning to take the cake and I scheduled to be there at 2pm.


They asked me about what hour Iwhat time was I planning to takecollect the cake at and I scheduled to be there at 2pm.

They asked me about what hourwhen I was planning to takepick up the cake and, so I scheduled to be there at 2pm.

The cake cost 20 dollars.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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