March 14, 2025
My watch
When I arrived at home, I noticed that I forgot to bring my watch my work place. I upseted about this problem.
I texted message to one of my colleges. She promised to find it instead of me because I am going to have day off. I'm relieved.
When I arrived at home, I noticed that I forgot to bring my watch from my work place.
I was upseted about this problem.
I texted (a message) to one of my collegagues.
She promised to find it instead offor me because I am going to have day off.
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March 16, 2025
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My watch
When I arrived at home, I noticed that I forgot to bring my watch from my work place.
I was upseted about this problem.
"upset" is not a verb, it's an state, so you "are" upset
I texted a message to one of my collegagues.
A more informal way of saying this is "I texted one of my colleagues".
"College" is a school/university, "colleague" is a person at work.
She promised to find it instead offor me because I am going to have the day off.
"instead of me" sounds odd here, it's better to say she's looking "for" you
I' am relieved.
The original is grammatically correct, but to my ear it sounds better without the contraction when you're making a short statement like this
March 15, 2025
I said here that "upset" is not a verb. I was incorrect. It *can* be a verb, but it would mean that you are causing someone else to be upset.
E.g.:
Verb: I upset her (I caused her to become upset)
State: I am upset
March 15, 2025
Thank you very much for correcting my sentence. I am glad that I get natural expression from you.
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My watch This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I arrived at home, I noticed that I forgot to bring my watch my work place. When I arrived at home, I noticed that I forgot to bring my watch When I arrived at home, I noticed that I forgot to bring my watch |
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I upseted about this problem. I was upset "upset" is not a verb, it's an state, so you "are" upset I was upset |
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I texted message to one of my colleges. I texted a message to A more informal way of saying this is "I texted one of my colleagues". "College" is a school/university, "colleague" is a person at work. I texted (a message) to |
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She promised to find it instead of me because I am going to have day off. She promised to find it "instead of me" sounds odd here, it's better to say she's looking "for" you She promised to find it |
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I'm relieved. I The original is grammatically correct, but to my ear it sounds better without the contraction when you're making a short statement like this |
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