Jan. 10, 2025
My walks
One of the steps I've been following in order to reach a new better life is to go on a walk for almost one hour a day. During these walks, I can listen some podcast or audiobooks to improve my level of English or to change my mindset.
One of the audiobooks I'm listening right now is "The name of the wind", one of my favourites -and in my opinion one of the best - fantastic books of all time. When I was young I read this book, altought I couldn't understand the message well. Now, as a young adult, I'm enjoying it like it was the first time I've read it. The main character is, simply, amazing, and the word building (despite isn't the best I've read) is so complete.
Further more, one of the podcast I'm listening to is "The power of time", where the presenters talk about the importance of planning our lives.
In short, everything is very focused in changing my life, right?
One of the steps I've been following in order to reach a new betterimprove my life is to go on a walk for almost one hour a day.
During these walks, I can listen to some podcast(s) or audiobooks to improve my level of English or to change my mindset.
It fits better to pick "some podcast or audiobook" or "some podcasts or audiobooks" here rather than mixing the singular/plural - unless you only ever listen to the one podcast but many audiobooks but I think here you're just listing sample activities.
One of the audiobooks I'm listening to right now is "The name of the wind", one of my favourites - and in my opinion one of the best - fantasticy books of all time.
"Fantasy" is the name of the book genre. "Fantastic" is an adjective meaning very good (or even better). Generally you wouldn't combine "best" and "fantastic", but I think you meant "fantasy" here anyway.
When I was young I read this book, althought I couldn't understand the message well.
The main character is, simply, amazing, and the word building (despite isn'tnot being the best I've read) is so complete.
Further more, one of the podcasts I'm listening to is "The power of time", where the presenters talk about the importance of planning our lives.
In short, everything is very focused ion changing my life, right?
Jan. 11, 2025
Thank you!
One of the steps I've been following in order to reach a new better life is to gogoing on a walk for almost onean hour a day.
'go' needs to be nominalised
In new better life new is kinda redundant.
an hour a day
During these walks, I can listen to some podcasts or audiobooks to improve my (level of) English or to change my mindset.
I'm a native so I actually don't know why, and I have to think for a while.
One of the audiobooks I'm listening to right now is "The name of the wind", which is one of my favourites -and in my opinion one of the best - fantastic books of all time.
listen to
When I was young, I read this book, altought I coulnd didn't understand the message well.
Now, as a young adult, I'm enjoying it likeas if it was the first time I've read it.
not sure idk
The main character is, simply, amazing, and the word building (despite isn'tnot being the best I've read) is so(idk but complete. sounds a bit unnatural but idk so imma leave it)
Further more, one of the podcasts I'm listening to is "The power of time", where the presenters talk about the importance of planning our lives.
In short, everything is very focused ion changing my life, right?
Feedback
my first correction here :)
Jan. 10, 2025
Thank you for your time! :)
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During these walks, I can listen some podcast or audiobooks to improve my level of English or to change my mindset. During these walks, I I'm a native so I actually don't know why, and I have to think for a while. During these walks, I can listen to some podcast(s) or audiobooks to improve my level of English or to change my mindset. It fits better to pick "some podcast or audiobook" or "some podcasts or audiobooks" here rather than mixing the singular/plural - unless you only ever listen to the one podcast but many audiobooks but I think here you're just listing sample activities. |
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Now, as a young adult, I'm enjoying it like it was the first time I've read it. Now, as a young adult, I'm enjoying it not sure idk |
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The main character is, simply, amazing, and the word building (despite isn't the best I've read) is so complete. The main character is The main character is, simply, amazing, and the word building (despite |
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