April 28, 2025
My thought about recent incidents
Today, I realized how uncertain our lives could be. I just got the news of an accident involving one of my seniors from my department. While we're busy planning for the future, we often forget the things happening in our present. We don't pay much attention to these details. I think that is the most vital reason why we get frustrated so easily. Even I am no exception. Despite understanding these things, I can't control my feelings, get easily disheartened, get paranoid thinking about the future, and lastly get depressed with life. Also, recent war news coming from all over the world makes me sad. I just don't understand what good a war can bring. Why don't world leaders choose the path of peace? I think no single citizen wants to be involved in or get affected by the war in the world. Why can't we all be united and live in peace?
Today, I realized how uncertain our lives could be.
I just got the news of an accident involving one of my seniors from my department.
While we're busy planning for the future, we often forget the things happening in our present.
We don't pay much attention to these details.
I think that is the most vital reason why we get frustrated so easily.
Even I am no exception.
Despite understanding these things, I can't control my feelings, and I get easily disheartened,. I also get paranoid thinking about the future, and lastly getbecome depressed with life.
I just don't understand what good a war can bring.
Why don't world leaders choose the path of peace?
I think no single citizen wants to be involved in or get affected by the war in the world.
Why can't we all be united and live in peace?
Feedback
Honestly, I feel you. I sometimes have these same thoughts.
My thought about recent incidents
Today, I realized how uncertain our lives could be.
I just got the news of an accident involving one of mythe seniors from my department.
This could potentially be correct depending on context, but "one of the seniors" sounds better.
While we're busy planning for the future, we often forget the things happening in our present.
We don't pay much attention to these details.
I think that is the most vital reason why we get frustrated so easily.
Even I am no exception.
Despite understanding these things, I can't control my feelings, get easily disheartened, get paranoid thinking about the future, and lastly, I get depressed with life.
Also, recent war news coming from all over the world makes me sad.
I just don't understand what good a war can bring.
Why don't world leaders choose the path of peace?
I think no single citizen wants to be involved in or get affected by the wars in the world.
Why can't we all be united and live in peace?
Feedback
Your writing level is excellent and I agree whole heartedly with your opinion.
Today, I realized how uncertain our lives couldan be.
“Can” sounds better because it’s talking about a real situation, and not s hypothetical one. Could works too, but it imply there is a criteria.
I just got the news of an accident involving one of my seniors from my department.
While we're busy planning for the future, we often forget the things happening in our present.
We don't pay much attention to these details.
I think that is the most vital reason why we get frustrated so easily.
Even I am not an exception.
Despite understanding these things, I can't control my feelings, get easily disheartened, get paranoid thinking about the future, and lastly get depressed with life.
Also, recent war news coming from all over the world makes me sad.
I just don't understand what good a war can bring.
Why don't world leaders choose the path of peace?
I think no single citizen wants to be involved in or get affected by the wars in the world.
Why can't we all be united and live in peace?
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