April 28, 2021
My spring days
Since I moved in new apartment, I have seen many flowers including cherry blossom in spring. Those beautiful flowers makes me better emotion even if we have been under difficult circumstances since last spring.
Recently, my most important issue is that I have to wake up earlier and join the group who want to talk English with foreigners. It is not easy to understand for me to talk many different accents every time. But I have to improve my English skill as soon as possible and also as much as I can for my future .
Some people love this season because after heavy winter season in New York , everybody waiting for spring which reduce weight of our clothes little by little and give us warm energy without our own efforts. I can wear new spring clothes and remove all heavy jackets and coats from my eyesight. I also see many summer fashion in the showcases of stores which decollate with vivid and showy colors in which we don't see in winter season.
Now it is 6 PM , but the outside is still bright and I am feeling warm air is coming from the window. I hope that this spring , my first step of aim will be going up and makes me happier than past springs.
Since I moved into my new apartment, I have seen many flowers including cherry blossoms in spring.
Those beautiful flowers makes me feel better emotion even ifven though we have been under difficult circumstances since last spring.
Recently, my most important issue is that I have to wake up earlier and join the group who wants to talk English with foreigners.
It is not easy to understand for me to talk many different accents every time.
I do not understand this sentence sorry:( Do you mean ‘It is not easy to understand people’s different accents?’
Some people love this season because after the heavy winter season in New York , everybody is waiting for spring which reduces weight of our clothes little by little and gives us warm energy without our own efforts.
May 4, 2021
Thank you so much for your correction for my writing. I will try to do my best for improving my writing a little by little. Have a great spring day !
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My spring days |
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Since I moved in new apartment, I have seen many flowers including cherry blossom in spring. Since I moved into my new apartment, I have seen many flowers including cherry blossoms in spring. |
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Those beautiful flowers makes me better emotion even if we have been under difficult circumstances since last spring. Those beautiful flowers make |
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Recently, my most important issue is that I have to wake up earlier and join the group who want to talk English with foreigners. Recently, my most important issue is that I have to wake up earlier and join the group who wants to talk English with foreigners. |
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It is not easy to understand for me to talk many different accents every time. It is not easy to understand for me to talk many different accents every time. I do not understand this sentence sorry:( Do you mean ‘It is not easy to understand people’s different accents?’ |
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But I have to improve my English skill as soon as possible and also as much as I can for my future . |
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Some people love this season because after heavy winter season in New York , everybody waiting for spring which reduce weight of our clothes little by little and give us warm energy without our own efforts. Some people love this season because after the heavy winter season in New York , everybody is waiting for spring which reduces weight of our clothes little by little and gives us warm energy without our own efforts. |
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I can wear new spring clothes and remove all heavy jackets and coats from my eyesight. |
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I also see many summer fashion in the showcases of stores which decollate with vivid and showy colors in which we don't see in winter season. |
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Now it is 6 PM , but the outside is still bright and I am feeling warm air is coming from the window. |
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I hope that this spring , my first step of aim will be going up and makes me happier than past springs. |
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