April 23, 2021
My sister is making an effort to find a job
Now, she is a junior at a university. In Japan, some people who want to find good jobs do job hunting, when they are a junior. She said that she wants to work at Netflix, but she may or may not work there, so she applies for a lot of companies. Our family studies in the living room, not our own room. So, she practices presentations for finding jobs, but I'm just a little ashamed of listening to that. So, when she starts to practice, I pretend not to hear that. But I hope that she works at a company where she really wants to work.
My sister is making an effort to find a job
Now, she is a junior at a university.
In Japan, some people who want to find good jobs dostart job hunting, when they are a junior.
She said that she wants to work at Netflix, but she may or may not worknot be able to get a job there, so. So, she's applies forying to a lot of companies.
This is a run-on sentence.
Our family studies in the living room, not our own rooms.
So, she practices presentations for finding jobs, but I'm just a little ashamed of listening to thait.
Why 'ashamed'?
So, when she istarts to practiceing, I pretend not to hear thather/listen.
But, I hope that she works at a company wherethat she really wants to work.
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Now, she is a junior at a university. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In Japan, some people who want to find good jobs do job hunting, when they are a junior. In Japan, some people who want to find good jobs |
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She said that she wants to work at Netflix, but she may or may not work there, so she applies for a lot of companies. She said that she wants to work at Netflix, but she may This is a run-on sentence. |
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Our family studies in the living room, not our own room. Our family studies in the living room, not our own rooms. |
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So, she practices presentations for finding jobs, but I'm just a little ashamed of listening to that. S Why 'ashamed'? |
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So, when she starts to practice, I pretend not to hear that. So, when she is |
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But I hope that she works at a company where she really wants to work. But, I hope that she works at a company |
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