April 23, 2021
My Sister And I Saw A Ghost.
I went camping in Karuizawa with my family when I was six.
The morning was foggy, quiet, and a little mysterious.
I went for a walk with my sister to a holiday home area near the campsite every morning.
We saw a woman strolling there every time.
She was clothed all in white, from her head to her foot.
She was wearing a white hat, a white dress, white shoes.
My sister and I went back to the campsite and told my parents that we had seen a ghost.
Now that I think about it, I think she was just a person staying a holiday home, but I was scared at that time.
I went camping in Karuizawa with my family when I was six.
The mornings wasere foggy, quiet, and a little mysterious.
If you want to talk about all the mornings, it's "the mornings were..." or just one morning in particular, it's "One morning was..."
I went for a walk with my sister to a holiday home area near the campsite every morning.
We saw a woman strolling there every time.
She was clothdressed all in white, from her head to her foottoe.
She was wearing a white hat, a white dress, and white shoes.
My sister and I went back to the campsite and told my parents that we had seen a ghost.
Now that I think about it, I think she was just a person staying a holiday home, but I was scared at that time.
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Well written and a cute story, well done!
May 8, 2021
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My Sister And I Saw A Ghost. |
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I went camping in Karuizawa with my family when I was six. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The morning was foggy, quiet, and a little mysterious. The mornings w If you want to talk about all the mornings, it's "the mornings were..." or just one morning in particular, it's "One morning was..." |
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I went for a walk with my sister to a holiday home area near the campsite every morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We saw a woman strolling there every time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She was clothed all in white, from her head to her foot. She was |
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She was wearing a white hat, a white dress, white shoes. She was wearing a white hat, a white dress, and white shoes. |
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My sister and I went back to the campsite and told my parents that we had seen a ghost. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now that I think about it, I think she was just a person staying a holiday home, but I was scared at that time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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