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June 13, 2025

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MY SCHOOL

The first time that i came to the school i felt nervous because i dont knew nobody, so i sit in front a girl to talk with her but it doesnt it. I dont Know how to make new friends. I want to be more sociable but i am shy. I hope to meet people nice.
I am student of medicina, its a difficult career but the same time its satisfactory, i want to be a surgery, while enjoy me reading books of suspense.


La primera vez que vine a la escuela me sentí nerviosa porque no conocía a nadie, así que me senté enfrente de una chica para hablarle pero no funcionó. No sé como hacer nuevos amigos. Quisiera ser más sociable pero soy tímida. Espero conocer gente agradable.
Soy estudiante de medicina, es una carrera difícil pero al mismo tiempo satisfactoria, quiero ser una cirujana, mientras me divierto leyendo libros de suspenso.

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MY SCHOOL

The first time that iI came to the school iI felt nervous because iI don't kneow noanybody, so iI siat in front a girl to talk with her but itshe doesn't italk back.

I dont Know how to make new friends.

I want to be more sociable but i am shy.

I hope to meet nice people nice.

I am student ofy medicina, ite. It's a difficult career but the same time itsit is also satisfactory, i. I want to be a surgery, whileon. I enjoy me reading books of suspensesuspenseful books.

The first time that i came to theI went to school iI felt nervous because iI donidn't kneow noanybody, so iI siat in front of a girl to talk with her but it doewasn't itgood.

I want to be more sociable but iI am shy.

I hope to meet nice people nice.

I am student of medicina,e, and it's a difficult career but at the same time it's satisfactory, i. I want to be a surgery, whileon. I also enjoy me reading books of suspensesuspenseful books.

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Great job!!

MYy SCHOOLchool

Title capitalization rules

The first time that iI came to the school i, I felt nervous because i donI didn't kneow noanybody, so iI siat in front of a girl to talk with her but it doesnt itthat didn't happen.

I = always capitalized

"I don't" is present tense. Since you are recounting a story (already happened), "I didn't" is the proper tense.

"It doesn't it" does not mean anything. I edited here if you mean that you and the girl did not end up talking.

I don't Kknow how to make new friends.

I want to be more sociable but iI am shy.

I hope to meet nice people nice.

Adjectives (nice) almost always go before nouns.

I am student of medicinae, it's a difficult career but at the same time it's satisfactory, iying. I want to be a surgery, whileon, and enjoy me reading books of suspensethriller novels.

Surgery is the act, surgeons are the doctors who perform it.

It's = contraction of it is. Its = possessive of it (for example: a tree and its leaves)

The last phrase sounds as if you want to read DURING performing surgery. If that isn't what you meant, I gave an alternative here. :)

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Good job. Best of luck with your education!

MY SCHOOL


MYy SCHOOLchool

Title capitalization rules

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The first time that i came to the school i felt nervous because i dont knew nobody, so i sit in front a girl to talk with her but it doesnt it.


The first time that iI came to the school i, I felt nervous because i donI didn't kneow noanybody, so iI siat in front of a girl to talk with her but it doesnt itthat didn't happen.

I = always capitalized "I don't" is present tense. Since you are recounting a story (already happened), "I didn't" is the proper tense. "It doesn't it" does not mean anything. I edited here if you mean that you and the girl did not end up talking.

The first time that i came to theI went to school iI felt nervous because iI donidn't kneow noanybody, so iI siat in front of a girl to talk with her but it doewasn't itgood.

The first time that iI came to the school iI felt nervous because iI don't kneow noanybody, so iI siat in front a girl to talk with her but itshe doesn't italk back.

I dont Know how to make new friends.


I don't Kknow how to make new friends.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to be more sociable but i am shy.


I want to be more sociable but iI am shy.

I want to be more sociable but iI am shy.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope to meet people nice.


I hope to meet nice people nice.

Adjectives (nice) almost always go before nouns.

I hope to meet nice people nice.

I hope to meet nice people nice.

I am student of medicina, its a difficult career but the same time its satisfactory, i want to be a surgery, while enjoy me reading books of suspense.


I am student of medicinae, it's a difficult career but at the same time it's satisfactory, iying. I want to be a surgery, whileon, and enjoy me reading books of suspensethriller novels.

Surgery is the act, surgeons are the doctors who perform it. It's = contraction of it is. Its = possessive of it (for example: a tree and its leaves) The last phrase sounds as if you want to read DURING performing surgery. If that isn't what you meant, I gave an alternative here. :)

I am student of medicina,e, and it's a difficult career but at the same time it's satisfactory, i. I want to be a surgery, whileon. I also enjoy me reading books of suspensesuspenseful books.

I am student ofy medicina, ite. It's a difficult career but the same time itsit is also satisfactory, i. I want to be a surgery, whileon. I enjoy me reading books of suspensesuspenseful books.

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