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Unomaru

April 27, 2025

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I'm going to move from Adachi Ward to Suginami Ward.
That's because I'll back to National government that adapted me.
At this time, It schedule at July 1st.
So, I have to prepare for moveing.
For example, checking new house, buying apliances and confirming my belongings.
These need some times to do.
Starting what I can is important for moving!

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That's because I'll be going back to the National government that (adapted) me.

Not sure what you meant by adapted here. Adapt is like 作り変える - it's a phrase we apply to things that get changed, not to people.

At this time, It schedule at(it / the move) is scheduled (for / on) July 1st.

I think it 's a little more natural to reuse the noun here, but you can use "it" if you want. It doesn't get a capital letter unless it's the start of a sentence.

You can actually use "for" or "on" here. "on" is more like what you were going for with "at", but I think it's a little more natural to use "for" here.

So, I have to prepare for moveing.

For example, checking (out) new houses, buying appliances and confirming my belongings.

"Checking new houses" is ok, "checking out new houses" is a bit more natural.

Also fixed a spelling mistake on appliances.

These need some times to do.

Time is actually a few different, but related words.

One is a measurement of duration. This form of time is uncountable, which means we don't use it as a plural form. This is the one you're using here, which is why it should be time, rather than times. This is a bit like とき or 時間

A second meaning is as a casual alternative to occasion or period. It's more like 際 or 時代 depending on context. This is the one that sometimes gets pluralised to "times".

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Moving also gets harder as you get older. The first time I moved as a student, I just took a couple of trips on the bus carrying some bags. The last time I moved, I needed a truck.

I'm going to move from Adachi Ward to Suginami Ward.

That's because I'llm going back to National government that adapted methe city that I'm from.

I'm not sure if this is what you meant to write.

At this time, Itit's schedule atd for July 1st.

So, I have to prepare for moveing.

For example, checking new house, buying appliances and confirming my belongings.

Theseis needs some times to do.

Starting what I can is important for moving!

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I'm going to move from Adachi Ward to Suginami Ward.

That's because I'll back toe going back to working for the National government that adaptwho hired me.

You may also mean that the national government "transfered you" if you were already working for them and the asked you to work in a different location.

At this time, Itit is schedule atd for July 1st.

So, I have to prepare for moveing.

Or, more naturally, we would say "I need to get ready to move"

For example, checking my new house, buying appliances and confirmverifying my belongings.

These needtake some times to do.

Starting what I can is important for moving!

That's because I'll go back to the National government that adaopted me.

At this time, Itit is schedule atd for July 1st.

So, I have to prepare for moveing.

For example, checking the new house, buying appliances and confirming my belongings.

These need some times to do.

Starting to do what I can is important for moving!

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Good Job! All the best for your move!

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I'm going to move from Adachi Ward to Suginami Ward.


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That's because I'll back to National government that adapted me.


That's because I'll go back to the National government that adaopted me.

That's because I'll back toe going back to working for the National government that adaptwho hired me.

You may also mean that the national government "transfered you" if you were already working for them and the asked you to work in a different location.

That's because I'llm going back to National government that adapted methe city that I'm from.

I'm not sure if this is what you meant to write.

That's because I'll be going back to the National government that (adapted) me.

Not sure what you meant by adapted here. Adapt is like 作り変える - it's a phrase we apply to things that get changed, not to people.

At this time, It schedule at July 1st.


At this time, Itit is schedule atd for July 1st.

At this time, Itit is schedule atd for July 1st.

At this time, Itit's schedule atd for July 1st.

At this time, It schedule at(it / the move) is scheduled (for / on) July 1st.

I think it 's a little more natural to reuse the noun here, but you can use "it" if you want. It doesn't get a capital letter unless it's the start of a sentence. You can actually use "for" or "on" here. "on" is more like what you were going for with "at", but I think it's a little more natural to use "for" here.

So, I have to prepare for moveing.


So, I have to prepare for moveing.

So, I have to prepare for moveing.

Or, more naturally, we would say "I need to get ready to move"

So, I have to prepare for moveing.

So, I have to prepare for moveing.

For example, checking new house, buying apliances and confirming my belongings.


For example, checking the new house, buying appliances and confirming my belongings.

For example, checking my new house, buying appliances and confirmverifying my belongings.

For example, checking new house, buying appliances and confirming my belongings.

For example, checking (out) new houses, buying appliances and confirming my belongings.

"Checking new houses" is ok, "checking out new houses" is a bit more natural. Also fixed a spelling mistake on appliances.

These need some times to do.


These need some times to do.

These needtake some times to do.

Theseis needs some times to do.

These need some times to do.

Time is actually a few different, but related words. One is a measurement of duration. This form of time is uncountable, which means we don't use it as a plural form. This is the one you're using here, which is why it should be time, rather than times. This is a bit like とき or 時間 A second meaning is as a casual alternative to occasion or period. It's more like 際 or 時代 depending on context. This is the one that sometimes gets pluralised to "times".

Starting what I can is important for moving!


Starting to do what I can is important for moving!

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