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My rutine

Hello,
Today is my day to practice writing, and it’s my first time using this app.
I’d like to tell you about my weekly routine.

First, I wake up at 5 a.m., take a shower, and have a cup of coffee. After that, I study English for one hour.
Next, I prepare and eat breakfast, then go to work. My job is very close to my home—just a five-minute walk. When I arrive at the office, I spend one hour working on my scientific article and another hour learning new software called OLGA.

Then, I begin my laboratory work, which usually lasts 8 to 9 hours. This part of my day is always busy: I walk around constantly, solve different problems, attend a few meetings, and carry out experimental analyses. In the middle of the day, I have lunch.

Around 5 or 6 p.m., I go back home, cook dinner, and relax for about an hour, usually talking with my boyfriend or my family. After that, I take care of personal tasks or check LinkedIn to look for job opportunities.

At 8 p.m., I exercise and take a shower. Finally, I go to bed around 10 or 11 p.m.

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My rdaily routine

Hello, ¶
Today is my day
. It is time for me to practice writing, and it’s my first time using this appwebsite.

NOTE: Langcorrect is a website, not an app.

I’d like to tell you about my weekdaily routine.

First, I wake up at 5 a.m., take a shower, and have a cup of coffee.

After that, I study English for one hour.

Next, I prepare and eat breakfast, then go to work.

My job is very close to my home—just a five-minute walk.

When IAfter arriveing at themy office, I spend one hour working on mya scientific article and another hour learning new software called OLGA.

Then, I begin my laboratory work, which usually lasts 8 to 9 hours.

This part of my day is always busy: I walk around constantly, solve different problems, attend a few meetings, and carry out experimental analyses.

In the middle of the day, I have lunch.

Around 5 or 6 p.m., I go back home, cook dinner, and relax for about an hour, usually talking with my boyfriend or my family.

After that, I take care of personal tasks or check LinkedIn to look for job opportunities.

At 8 p.m., I exercise and take a shower.

Finally, I go to bed around 10 or 11 p.m.

Feedback

Very clear! I am curious which scientific field you are working in. Perhaps future posts will describe that?

My rutine

Misspelling here - it is "Routine"

I’d like to tell you about my weekly routine.

Not inherently wrong, but you mostly go on to describe what is actually your "daily" routine. I would say that instead. Or, "I would like to tell you about my normal weekday routine."

First, I wake up at 5 a.m., take a shower, and have a cup of coffee.

My job is very close to my home—just a five-minute walk.

This is good - we often use time as a way of measuring distances rather than actual distance. At least in conversation.

When I arrive at the office, I spend one hour working on my scientific article and another hour learning new software called OLGA.

"my scientific article" - is there only one that you are always working on? Or do you have to write a new one regularly? You could include that data. The second part of your sentence should read "another hour learning a new software.." You need the article "a" before "new".

In the middle of the day, I have lunch.

I'd say it like this since you already described the 8 to 9 hours. "Somewhere/sometime in the middle of the day, ..." You need to indicate the interruption since you already said what happened in those hours and didn't include lunch.

Around 5 or 6 p.m., I go back home, cook dinner, and relax for about an hour, usually talking with my boyfriend or my family.

This is a lot of sentence not broken up. "Around 5 or 6 p.m., I go home to cook dinner, and then I relax for about an hour. Usually I spend some time talking with my boyfriend or my family." How you wrote it is fine, but it's a lot to process in one sentence. You're better off separating it somewhere to lessen confusion. Like you're communicating many things to process: going home at this time, cooking dinner, but also relaxing, and while relaxing you do this or this. Breaking it up will help people process it.

After that, I take care of personal tasks or check LinkedIn to look for job opportunities.

It would be interesting to hear what kind of job opportunity you look for!

Feedback

Overall, this is really well written! I think depending on the scenario you are writing in, I wouldn't use the "first, next, last" language so much to describe things. But for an assignment, it works really well! You were concise but descriptive. Grammar, spelling, and sentence structure were all good overall.

This part of my day is always busy: I walk around constantly, solve different problems, attend a few meetings, and carry out experimental analyses.

In the middle of the day, I have lunch.

Around 5 or 6 p.m., I go back home, cook dinner, and relax for about an hour, usuall by talking with my boyfriend or my family.

Makes it flow a little better but what you had isn't necessarily wrong. At least I don't think so.

At 8 p.m., I exercise andthen take a shower.

Feedback

Nice work

My job is very close to my home—just a five-minute walk.


My job is very close to my home—just a five-minute walk.

This is good - we often use time as a way of measuring distances rather than actual distance. At least in conversation.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I arrive at the office, I spend one hour working on my scientific article and another hour learning new software called OLGA.


When I arrive at the office, I spend one hour working on my scientific article and another hour learning new software called OLGA.

"my scientific article" - is there only one that you are always working on? Or do you have to write a new one regularly? You could include that data. The second part of your sentence should read "another hour learning a new software.." You need the article "a" before "new".

When IAfter arriveing at themy office, I spend one hour working on mya scientific article and another hour learning new software called OLGA.

Then, I begin my laboratory work, which usually lasts 8 to 9 hours.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This part of my day is always busy: I walk around constantly, solve different problems, attend a few meetings, and carry out experimental analyses.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the middle of the day, I have lunch.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the middle of the day, I have lunch.

I'd say it like this since you already described the 8 to 9 hours. "Somewhere/sometime in the middle of the day, ..." You need to indicate the interruption since you already said what happened in those hours and didn't include lunch.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Around 5 or 6 p.m., I go back home, cook dinner, and relax for about an hour, usually talking with my boyfriend or my family.


Around 5 or 6 p.m., I go back home, cook dinner, and relax for about an hour, usuall by talking with my boyfriend or my family.

Makes it flow a little better but what you had isn't necessarily wrong. At least I don't think so.

Around 5 or 6 p.m., I go back home, cook dinner, and relax for about an hour, usually talking with my boyfriend or my family.

This is a lot of sentence not broken up. "Around 5 or 6 p.m., I go home to cook dinner, and then I relax for about an hour. Usually I spend some time talking with my boyfriend or my family." How you wrote it is fine, but it's a lot to process in one sentence. You're better off separating it somewhere to lessen confusion. Like you're communicating many things to process: going home at this time, cooking dinner, but also relaxing, and while relaxing you do this or this. Breaking it up will help people process it.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After that, I take care of personal tasks or check LinkedIn to look for job opportunities.


After that, I take care of personal tasks or check LinkedIn to look for job opportunities.

It would be interesting to hear what kind of job opportunity you look for!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At 8 p.m., I exercise and take a shower.


At 8 p.m., I exercise andthen take a shower.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Finally, I go to bed around 10 or 11 p.m.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My rutine


My rutine

Misspelling here - it is "Routine"

My rdaily routine

Hello, Today is my day to practice writing, and it’s my first time using this app.


Hello, ¶
Today is my day
. It is time for me to practice writing, and it’s my first time using this appwebsite.

NOTE: Langcorrect is a website, not an app.

I’d like to tell you about my weekly routine.


I’d like to tell you about my weekly routine.

Not inherently wrong, but you mostly go on to describe what is actually your "daily" routine. I would say that instead. Or, "I would like to tell you about my normal weekday routine."

I’d like to tell you about my weekdaily routine.

First, I wake up at 5 a.m., take a shower, and have a cup of coffee.


First, I wake up at 5 a.m., take a shower, and have a cup of coffee.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After that, I study English for one hour.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Next, I prepare and eat breakfast, then go to work.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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