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Fabricio

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Hi, I'm Fabricio
I'm writing a short text because I want to improve my English. I can start with my routine. First, I wake up at 7:00 am, then I take a cold shower that helps me to have more energy in the morning. In addition, I'm going to the GYM, I really like exercise. Second, I'm going to the University here I spend a lot of hours studying, and finally I go back home to study English for at least 1 hour, then I play video games with my friends

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Hi, I'm Fabricio ¶
I'm writing a short text because I want to improveello! For starters, my name is Fabricio, and I wanted to try submitting a post here for review as another step along the path toward perfecting my English.

Hopefully this isn't too overwhelming, however it should hopefully provide a framework for what an actual native might say

I can start withwould like to start by describing my routine.:

FirstUsually, I wake up at 7:00 am, then I take a cold shower that helps me to have more energy in the morningaround 7 in the morning, and from there, hop into the shower. I find that doing so provides me with the energy I need to take on the rest of my day.

In addition, I'm going to the GYM, I really lik to this, I also tend to go to the gym rather frequently as I love exerciseing.

Second, I'm going to the UIt should also be noted that I am currently attending a university , where I spend a lot of hours studying, and finally I go back home to study English for at least 1 hour, then Imuch of my time studying each day. When my classes conclude, I return home to study English for around an hour a day, before setting aside some time to play video games with my friends.

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These edits are thorough, but I hope that they can serve as a vital resource for you. It may take a while to understand it all, but if you were to at least paste this onto a forum somewhere, you would at least present as being native-like. How much you get out of my corrections depends on your own inherent determination, however if you can properly dissect what I have written, it will give you a massive head-start in your language journey.

My routine

Hi, I'm Fabricio I'm writing a short text because I want to improve my English.

Hi, I'm Fabricio ¶
I'm writing a short text because I want to improveello! For starters, my name is Fabricio, and I wanted to try submitting a post here for review as another step along the path toward perfecting my English.

Hopefully this isn't too overwhelming, however it should hopefully provide a framework for what an actual native might say

I can start with my routine.

I can start withwould like to start by describing my routine.:

First, I wake up at 7:00 am, then I take a cold shower that helps me to have more energy in the morning.

FirstUsually, I wake up at 7:00 am, then I take a cold shower that helps me to have more energy in the morningaround 7 in the morning, and from there, hop into the shower. I find that doing so provides me with the energy I need to take on the rest of my day.

In addition, I'm going to the GYM, I really like exercise.

In addition, I'm going to the GYM, I really lik to this, I also tend to go to the gym rather frequently as I love exerciseing.

Second, I'm going to the University here I spend a lot of hours studying, and finally I go back home to study English for at least 1 hour, then I play video games with my friends

Second, I'm going to the UIt should also be noted that I am currently attending a university , where I spend a lot of hours studying, and finally I go back home to study English for at least 1 hour, then Imuch of my time studying each day. When my classes conclude, I return home to study English for around an hour a day, before setting aside some time to play video games with my friends.

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