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nevalbenek

April 19, 2025

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my room

Hello. Today i want to write about my room. I have a small room but my room is functional for me. Because i do yoga and i have a yoga corner in my room. There are many things I love in my room. Design of room is bohemian. There are a desk, a single bed, a small closet. I am minimalist and my room suits that. there are a window. the window open to beautiful view. Finally I love my room.


merhaba. bugün odam hakkında yazmak istiyorum. küçük ama benim için kullanışlı bir odam var. çünkü ben yoga yapıyorum ve odamda bir yoga köşesi var. odamda sevdiğim pek ok şey var. odamın tasarımı bohem. bir çalışma masası, bir tek kişilik yatak ve küçük bir dolap var. minimalistim ve odamda bu şekilde. bir pencerem var. bu pencere güzel manzaraya açılıyor. son olarak odamı seviyorum.

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Hello.

Today i want to write about my room.

I have a small room, but my room is functional for me.

Alternately: ". . . but my room is adequate for me."

BecausSince iI do yoga and i have a yoga corner in my room.

There are many things I love in my room.

DThe design of the room is bBohemian.

Or "The room's design is Bohemian."

There areis a desk, a single bed, a small closet.

I am a minimalist and my room suits thatme.

tThere areis a window.

the window open toFrom it, I can see a beautiful view outside.

I feel like this better describes what I think you're trying to convey. That there's a window and whenever you look and see the outside world from it, there's some beautiful view/scenery.

Finally, I love my room.

Feedback

Great job! It's important to have a room that suits your needs since you spend the majority of time in it.

mMy rRoom

Hello.

Today i, I want to write about my room.

I have a small room, but my room iit's functional for me.

Because iI do yoga and iI have a yoga corner in my room.

There are many things I love inabout my room.

DThe design of the room is bBohemian.

There areis a desk, a single bed, and a small closet.

I am a minimalist and my room suits thatme.

tThere are ais one window.,

Combine this with the next sentence, it flows better.

the windowwhich opens to a beautiful view.

FinallyAll things considered, I love my room.

This is a more natural sounding way to end your essay.

Feedback

Note that a "room" is general, but a "bedroom" is specifically your personal room where you sleep. You can use either in this case though. Great job! =)

mMy rRoom

Today iI want to write about my room.

I have a small room but my room it is functional for me.,

Bbecause iI do yoga and imy room haves a yoga corner in my room.

There are many things that I love in my room.

Design of roomIts design is bohemian.

There are a desk, a single bed, and a small closet.

I am minimalist and my room suits that.

tThere are awindows. / There is one window.

tThe window opens to beautiful views.

FinallyIn conclusion I love my room.

Feedback

Wow! Your room seems so cozy. Great Text!

my room


mMy rRoom

mMy rRoom

Hello.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today i want to write about my room.


Today iI want to write about my room.

Today i, I want to write about my room.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have a small room but my room is functional for me.


I have a small room but my room it is functional for me.,

I have a small room, but my room iit's functional for me.

I have a small room, but my room is functional for me.

Alternately: ". . . but my room is adequate for me."

Because i do yoga and i have a yoga corner in my room.


Bbecause iI do yoga and imy room haves a yoga corner in my room.

Because iI do yoga and iI have a yoga corner in my room.

BecausSince iI do yoga and i have a yoga corner in my room.

There are many things I love in my room.


There are many things that I love in my room.

There are many things I love inabout my room.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Design of room is bohemian.


Design of roomIts design is bohemian.

DThe design of the room is bBohemian.

DThe design of the room is bBohemian.

Or "The room's design is Bohemian."

There are a desk, a single bed, a small closet.


There are a desk, a single bed, and a small closet.

There areis a desk, a single bed, and a small closet.

There areis a desk, a single bed, a small closet.

I am minimalist and my room suits that.


I am minimalist and my room suits that.

I am a minimalist and my room suits thatme.

I am a minimalist and my room suits thatme.

there are a window.


tThere are awindows. / There is one window.

tThere are ais one window.,

Combine this with the next sentence, it flows better.

tThere areis a window.

the window open to beautiful view.


tThe window opens to beautiful views.

the windowwhich opens to a beautiful view.

the window open toFrom it, I can see a beautiful view outside.

I feel like this better describes what I think you're trying to convey. That there's a window and whenever you look and see the outside world from it, there's some beautiful view/scenery.

Finally I love my room.


FinallyIn conclusion I love my room.

FinallyAll things considered, I love my room.

This is a more natural sounding way to end your essay.

Finally, I love my room.

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