April 21, 2021
I'm in a relationship with somebody and we have lived together for 9 months. When we just got together, he happened to move to the city where I live and started to live by himself. I had lived with my family, but I started to live with him gradually because we had a lot of time together. Since we were college students until last month, we had a lot of time to spend with, like watching movies, hanging out together, eating out, and drinking often. But, since April, he has been super busy because he becomes a member of society. He is a manager of his personal fitness club and an instructor as well. He works as an instructor from morning to evening and after that, he starts office work after 12 if it finishes late. Moreover, he has been renovating his gym by himself recently to make another space by separating, which enables him to instruct two clients at the same time. That means he can earn double. Anyway I mean, he is too busy to spend time with me. In contrast, I have nothing to do except job hunting. I was going to Australia on a working holiday after I graduated from college, but the plan was spoiled because of the pandemic of coronavirus. And this situation will continue a little bit longer, so I gave up going to Australia once and started job hunting in Japan. These days, I have a few interviews online or take English lessons and just do chores and make dinner for him every day. I feel a little bored and miss the days I spent time with him. I know I have to get used to this situation early, but it's kind of difficult for me to do that. Anyway, I will do my best to get a job and to learn English right now. After things gets better, I want to travel overseas with him.
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I'm in a relationship with somebody and we have lived together for 9 months.
When we just got together, he happened to move to the city where I live and started to lived by himself to begin with.
I had lived with my family, but I gradually started to limove in with him gradually because we hadspent a lot of time together.
Since we were college students until last month, we had a lot of time to spend with,together, and did things like watching movies, hanging out together, eating out, and drinking often.
But, since April, he has been super busy because he has becomes a member of society.
"... he has become a member of society" sounds either like a you're talking about him becoming a very high-level important person like a lord, or that you're joking. If you're joking, you can add an exclamation mark at the end of the sentence to show that. Otherwise perhaps you could say "because he has gotten a job". Everyone is a member of society :)
He is a manager of his personal fitness club and an instructor as well.
Does he own the club? If so, your sentence is fine, except you'd probably say "He is the owner and manager..." If he works there but doesn't own it, you could say "He is the manager at a personal fitness club" or just "He manages a personal fitness club and is an instructor as well".
He works as an instructor from morning to evening and after that, he startdoes office work after 12until after midnight if it finishes late.
Moreover, he has recently been renovating his gym by himself recently to make another space by separating two spaces/a room, which enables him to instruct two clients at the same time.
You need a subject for what he is separating.
That means he can earn double.
Anyway I mean, he is too busy to spend time with me.
In contrast, I have nothing to do except job hunting.
I was going to Australia on a working holiday after I graduated from college, but the plan was spoiled because of the pandemic of cCoronavirus pandemic.
And tThis situation will continue a little bit longer, so I gave up on going to Australia once and started job hunting in Japan.
These days, I have a few interviews online or take English lessons and just do chores and make dinner for him every day.
I feel a little bored and miss the days I spent time with him.
I know I have to get used to this situation early, but it's kind of difficult for me to do that.
Anyway, I will do my best to get a job and to learn English right now.
After things gets better, I want to travel overseas with him.
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That means he can earn double. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm in a relationship with somebody and we have lived together for 9 months. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When we just got together, he happened to move to the city where I live and started to live by himself. When we just got together, he happened to move to the city where I live and |
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I had lived with my family, but I started to live with him gradually because we had a lot of time together. I |
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Since we were college students until last month, we had a lot of time to spend with, like watching movies, hanging out together, eating out, and drinking often. Since we were college students until last month, we had a lot of time to spend |
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But, since April, he has been super busy because he becomes a member of society. But, since April, he has been super busy because he has become "... he has become a member of society" sounds either like a you're talking about him becoming a very high-level important person like a lord, or that you're joking. If you're joking, you can add an exclamation mark at the end of the sentence to show that. Otherwise perhaps you could say "because he has gotten a job". Everyone is a member of society :) |
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He is a manager of his personal fitness club and an instructor as well. He is a manager of his personal fitness club and an instructor as well. Does he own the club? If so, your sentence is fine, except you'd probably say "He is the owner and manager..." If he works there but doesn't own it, you could say "He is the manager at a personal fitness club" or just "He manages a personal fitness club and is an instructor as well". |
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He works as an instructor from morning to evening and after that, he starts office work after 12 if it finishes late. He works as an instructor from morning to evening and after that, he |
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Moreover, he has been renovating his gym by himself recently to make another space by separating, which enables him to instruct two clients at the same time. Moreover, he has recently been renovating his gym by himself You need a subject for what he is separating. |
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Anyway I mean, he is too busy to spend time with me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In contrast, I have nothing to do except job hunting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was going to Australia on a working holiday after I graduated from college, but the plan was spoiled because of the pandemic of coronavirus. I was going to Australia on a working holiday after I graduated from college, but the plan was spoiled because of the |
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And this situation will continue a little bit longer, so I gave up going to Australia once and started job hunting in Japan.
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These days, I have a few interviews online or take English lessons and just do chores and make dinner for him every day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I feel a little bored and miss the days I spent time with him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I know I have to get used to this situation early, but it's kind of difficult for me to do that. I know I have to get used to this situation |
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Anyway, I will do my best to get a job and to learn English right now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After things gets better, I want to travel overseas with him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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