Hi, I'm Camilo,. I am 24 years old, I am a lawyer, and I am doing a specializationing in Medical Law in Colombia.

Usually, "Hi, I'm __________" is a sentence on its own. Or, the next clause would begin with a conjunction like "and". Example: "Hi, I'm Camilo, and I am 24 years old..."

I am looking for a good job;. I want to improve my eEnglish level to increase my job opportunities and to be able to have a fluent conversation in ethe English language ¶
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My wish is to speak two more languages, the first eEnglish and the second one German.

Language names are always capitalized in English.

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"u" works very well as a shortening of "you" in very informal writing, but if you wish to be formal, you would want to use "you".

After "for", the infinitive form (to ______) of a verb sounds odd. We would instead use the progressive form (______ing). So, "Thank you so much for READING..." works, but "give" should also be progressive: "...and TO GIVE me tips..." should be "...and GIVING me tips..."

Also, "I" is always capitalized when it is by itself. At least, in formally written English.

"I hope to continue for a long time" isn't completely wrong, but I would personally specify what exactly is being continued. In this case, "being here".

Hi, I'm Camilo, I am 24 years old, I am a lawyer and I am doing a specialization studying Medical Law in Colombia.

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My wish is to speak two more languages, the first eis English and the second one is German.

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Hi, I'm Camilo, I am 24 years old, I am a lawyer and I am doing a specializationsing in Medical Law in Colombia.

I am looking for a good job;. I want to improve my eEnglish level toso that I can increase my job opportunities and to be able to have a fluent conversation in eEnglish language ¶
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My wish is to speak two more languages, the first ebeing English and the secondother one German.

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Hi, I'm Camilo, and I am 24 years old, I am a lawyer and I am doing a specialization in Medical Law in Colombia.

I am currently looking for a good job;. I want to improve my eEnglish levelin order to increase my job opportunities and to be able to have a fluent conversations in eEnglish language ¶
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My wish is to speak two more languages, the first english and the second one German. I want to be able speak German in addition to English.

- In English, it is implied that you want a good job, so you don't have to specify that.
- "I want" is more commonly used than "My wish is."
- Since you've already said you want to speak English, you don't have to repeat that. You can just say you want to speak German and add "in addition to English."
- Make sure to always capitalize English because it is a language.

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