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Mahder

Jan. 19, 2025

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I have watched and read a lots of films and books. I usually love watching mysteries and thriller movies which have made me to realize a lot of things that i did not give much attention before. So from now on i plan to write my reflection , the thing i learned and from the movie I watched or the book I read. I hope it will help me not only to improve my writing skill but also overcome the struggle of reflection my thoughts.

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I have watched and read a lots of films and books.

Never 'a lot'

I usually love watching mysteries and thriller movies which have made me to realize a lot of things that i did not give muchpay attention to before.

Pay attention is more idiomatic

So from now on i plan to write my reflection , the things and what i learned and from the movie I watched or the book I read.

I hope it will help me not only to improve my writing skills but also overcome the struggle of reflecting on my thoughts.

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my plan

I have watched and read a lots of films and books.

I usually love watching mysteriesy and thriller movies which haves made me to realize a lot of things that i did not give much attention before.

If you pluralize "mystery" here, it sounds to me like you like watching "mysteries" and also like watching "thriller movies." But "mystery" should actually be adjectival here. "Mystery movies" and "thriller movies".

So from now on i plan to write my reflection (?), the thing i learned and from the movie I watched or the book I read.

You can "reflect" on things that you've watched, but I feel it's a bit of a heavy word here. It's often used in forms like "reflect on your actions", to consider your behavior and the (negative) impact it's had on others. But I also feel "reflections" isn't really used to refer to the thoughts you have while reflecting. I think just plain old "write my thoughts" is best here.

I hope it will help me to not only to improve my writing skill , but also overcome the struggle of reflection(?) my thoughts.

"reflect" being a verb and having "my thoughts" as a direct object, "reflection" is the wrong form here. Though I'm not entirely sure what it would mean. I think you might say "organize my thoughts" or something like that here.

my plan

I have watched and read a lots of films and books.

I usually love watching mysteries and thriller movies, which have made me to realize a lot of things that iI did not give much attention to before.

So from now on iI plan to write my reflection on these, the thing is that I learned and from the movies I watched or the books I read.

I hope it will help me not only to improve my writing skill but also overcome the struggle of reflectiong my thoughts.

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Mahder

Jan. 19, 2025

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thanks for the feedback. Would you mind if you speak Amharic?

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Mahder

Jan. 19, 2025

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*Would you mind if I ask whether you speak Amharic?

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bdlance

Jan. 19, 2025

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I don't speak Amharic, unfortunately 🥲. However, I live in a city in the US where there are a lot of Ethiopian people. Even our local government documents are also printed in Amharic.

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I have watched and read a lots of films and books.


I have watched and read a lots of films and books.

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I have watched and read a lots of films and books.

Never 'a lot'

I usually love watching mysteries and thriller movies which have made me to realize a lot of things that i did not give much attention before.


I usually love watching mysteries and thriller movies, which have made me to realize a lot of things that iI did not give much attention to before.

I usually love watching mysteriesy and thriller movies which haves made me to realize a lot of things that i did not give much attention before.

If you pluralize "mystery" here, it sounds to me like you like watching "mysteries" and also like watching "thriller movies." But "mystery" should actually be adjectival here. "Mystery movies" and "thriller movies".

I usually love watching mysteries and thriller movies which have made me to realize a lot of things that i did not give muchpay attention to before.

Pay attention is more idiomatic

So from now on i plan to write my reflection , the thing i learned and from the movie I watched or the book I read.


So from now on iI plan to write my reflection on these, the thing is that I learned and from the movies I watched or the books I read.

So from now on i plan to write my reflection (?), the thing i learned and from the movie I watched or the book I read.

You can "reflect" on things that you've watched, but I feel it's a bit of a heavy word here. It's often used in forms like "reflect on your actions", to consider your behavior and the (negative) impact it's had on others. But I also feel "reflections" isn't really used to refer to the thoughts you have while reflecting. I think just plain old "write my thoughts" is best here.

So from now on i plan to write my reflection , the things and what i learned and from the movie I watched or the book I read.

I hope it will help me not only to improve my writing skill but also overcome the struggle of reflection my thoughts.


I hope it will help me not only to improve my writing skill but also overcome the struggle of reflectiong my thoughts.

I hope it will help me to not only to improve my writing skill , but also overcome the struggle of reflection(?) my thoughts.

"reflect" being a verb and having "my thoughts" as a direct object, "reflection" is the wrong form here. Though I'm not entirely sure what it would mean. I think you might say "organize my thoughts" or something like that here.

I hope it will help me not only to improve my writing skills but also overcome the struggle of reflecting on my thoughts.

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