My Opinion on Telecom Fraud (4) - Cambodia and Northern Myanmar

In 2016, Spainish police caught hundreds of scammers from Taiwan but sent them to China.

This led the authority ofies in Taiwan to show unhappiness with the government of Spain, however, most people in Taiwan believed only the brutal labor camp canould really teach the scammers an unforgettable lesson.

According to some sources, after this repatriaextradition, there have been no large-scale telecom scam cases reported in Europe.

凄いですね。

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Extradition

Many YouTubers have claimed they were forced to pay bribes namcalled tips to policemen when they reportinged a casrime at the police station.

残念ですね。

The central government of Myanmar is actually unable to manage this region andwhich has been ruled by different local warlords.

Before the coronavirus pandemic, that is before 2020.

This is a sentence fragment so I added it to the next line.

SBefore the coronavirus pandemic, that is before 2020, scammers flocked to the above areas, mainly from China and Taiwan (Tthough we claim Taiwan as a province of China).

All the scammers wereorked volunteersarily; no one forced them to commit this kind of crime.

The northern Myanmar warlords used the bloodstolen money to strengthen their military.

"Blood money" is when people are killed for the money.

How much money have the scammers earned, in contraststolen compared to how many tears and broken families are behind itfrom whom they stole?

The link below shows how a lady in America was scammed for around $ 1M.

また、
The link below shows how a woman in the US was scammed for around $ 1M.

残念！

My Opinion on Telecom Fraud (4)- Cambodia and Northern Myanmar

In 2016, Spainish police caught hundred of scammers from Taiwan but sent them to China.

悲剧啊，这什么鬼逻辑 😄

This led the authority of Taiwan to show unhappiness withTaiwanese authorities to display displeasure towards the government of Spain, h. However, most people in Taiwan believed only the brutal labor camp can really teach the scammers an unforgettable lesson.

'Display displeasure' is perhaps still not the best way of phrasing things, do check out how other people correct this.

According to some sources, after this repatriation, there have been no large-scale telecom scam cases reported in Europe.

Careful with the word repatriation here. You *almost* used it correctly. However, note that it means that someone was sent back to their *home country*. The scammers were sent to China so they were not technically repatriated.

Many YouTubers have claimed they were forced to pay bribes named (a.k.a. 'tips') to policemen when they reporting a case at the police station.

Scammers flocked to the above areas, mainly from China and Taiwan (Though we claim Taiwan as a province of China).

To be honest, you don't really need to include the second part, it just makes things confusing. If you do have to include it I would add it in another sentence to make more sense.

All the scammers were volunteers; no one forced them to commit this kind of crime.

The northern Myanmar warlords used the blood money to strengthen their military.

I actually never knew blood money could be used in this context, checked it, and you are right. 👍

How much money have the scammers earned, in contrast to how many tears and broken families are behind it?

OK I think this needs a bit of restructuring.
'Is the money these scammers have earned worth the number of tears and broken families their actions caused?'

The link below shows how a lady in America was scammed for around $ 1M.