April 14, 2025
My Old House Site
My family lived in a small village when I was a child, where people farmed to make a living.
Years later, my siblings and I all left that village and worked in cities. During the time we were away, my father and mother passed away.
The house we used to live in was still there, but it was really shabby compared with other families' newly built houses.
According to current Chinese policy, to own a house in the countryside, people should be members of the rural collective economy, which means you have a piece of land in a village and engage in farm work for a living.
Since we moved to cities to work for the government, we lost our land at that time. Although our old house is still there,
Officially we have no right to renovate our old house. However, we cannot bear the thought of losing our house site.
I have been wondering if I can renovate our old house. Even if I can, there must be a lot of work that needs to be done in advance.
Although our old house is still there,
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I have been wondering if I can renovate our old house.
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Good job! I hope everything works out for you.
April 15, 2025
Thank you very much.
My Old House SitThe Site of My Childhood Home
My family lived in a small village when I was a child, where people farmed to make a living.
Years later, my siblings and I all left that village and went on to worked in cities. (or: work in urban areas.)
During the time we were away, my father and mother passed away.
The house we used to live in was still there, but it was really shabby compared withto other families' newly built houses.
According to current Chinese policy, to own a house in the countryside, people should be members of the rural collective economy, which means you have a piece of land in a village and engage in farm work for a living.
Since we moved to cities to work for the government, we lost our (rights to our) land at that time.
Although our old house is still there,
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officially we have no right to renovate our old house.
However, we cannot bear the thought of losing our house site.
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(or: I have been wondering if I could have our old house renovated.)
Even if I canould, there must be a lot of work that needs to be done in advance.
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Well done! I wish you the best of luck with regards to your house and lot.
April 15, 2025
Thank you very much.
My Old House Site
My family lived in a small village when I was a child, where people farmed to make a living.
Years later, my siblings and I all left that village and worked in other cities.
During the time we were away, my father and mother passed away.
The house we used to live in was still there, but it was really shabby compared with other families' newly built houses.
According to current Chinese policy, to own a house in the countryside, people should be members of the rural collective economy, which means you have a piece of land in a village and engage in farm work for a living.
Since we moved to citiesthe city to work for the government, we lost our land at that time.
Although our old house is still there,
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officially we have no right to renovate our old house.
However, we cannot bear the thought of losing our house site.
I have been wondering if I can renovate our old house.
Even if I can, there must be a lot of work that needs to be done in advance.
April 14, 2025
Thank you very much.
My Old House Site
My family lived in a small village when I was a child, where people farmed to make a living.
Years later, my siblings and I all left that village and worked in cities.
During the time we were away, my father and mother passed away.
The house we used to live in was still there, but it was really shabby compared with other families' newly built houses.
According to current Chinese policy, to own a house in the countryside, people should be members of the rural collective economy, which means you have a piece of land in a village and engage in farm work for a living.
Since we moved to cities to work for the government, we lost our land at that time.
Although our old house is still there,
¶ officially we have no right to renovate
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However, we cannot bear the thought of losing our housthe site.
What you wrote is correct but it doesn't sound like something that I would say.
I have been wondering if I can renovate our oldthe house.
Even if I can, there must be a lot of work that needs to be done in advance.
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This is excellent work!
April 14, 2025
Thank you very much.
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