April 5, 2025
My My Research in Australia
During my study abroad, I researched about Australia's election and how many young people have interested in political. In Japan, most of young people don't have interest about political. Also, they don't go to vote, so young Japanese vote rate is very low. But in Australia, voting is mandatory. So, Australia's voting rate is very high. There are more option than Japan to vote. For example, Mobile Voting and Telephone Voting. If Austrailan people don't vote, they have to pay a fire. On 26th October, an election was held in Queensland. I asked some people if they went to vote, they all answered they did. From my reserch, even Australians young people don't have intrest about political, they vote as a duty.
My My Research in Australia
During my study abroad, I researched about Australia's elections and how many young people havare interested in politicals.
In Japan, most of young people don't have interest aboutin politicals.
There are more options than Japan to vote.
If Austrailian people don't vote, they have to pay a firne.
On the 26th of October, an election was held in Queensland.
From my research, even Australians young people don't have an interest aboutin political,s, but they vote as a duty.
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This is good! I made some consistent corrections throughout which you can work on, but this is an interesting topic and you've articulated yourself well.
My My Research in Australia
During my study abroad, I researched about Australia's election and how many young people have an interested in politicals.
In Japan, most of young people don't have an interest about political.
That's interesting to know!
Also, they don't go to vote, so young Japanese vote rate is very lowthe voting rate is low in young Japanese people.
But in Australia, voting is mandatory.
So, Australia's voting rate is very high.
There are more voting options than in Japan to vote.
For example, Mmobile Voting and Ttelephone Vvoting.
Great sentence, we also have postal votes here!
If Austrailian people don't vote, they have to pay a firne.
On 26th October, an election was held in Queensland.
I asked some people if they went to vote, they all answered they did.
From my research, even Australian's young people don't have interest about politicals, they vote as a duty.
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If Austrailan people don't vote, they have to pay a firne.
fine not fire
From my research, even Australian's young people don't have interest about politicals, they vote as a duty.
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The fine is like $80 AUD. Honestly id rather pay a fine than vote. Do you know how many people have lost their seat in parliament? Id say like 1,000
May 5, 2025
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In Japan, most of young people don't have interest about political. In Japan, most That's interesting to know! In Japan, most |
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Also, they don't go to vote, so young Japanese vote rate is very low. Also, they don't go to vote, so |
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So, Australia's voting rate is very high. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are more option than Japan to vote. There are more voting options than in Japan There are more options than Japan to vote. |
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For example, Mobile Voting and Telephone Voting. For example, Great sentence, we also have postal votes here! |
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I asked some people if they went to vote, they all answered they did. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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