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SummerTeaWater

May 25, 2021

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My Musical Instrument

I have practiced an Oboe since 2011.

I participated in an amateur orchestra just after joining my company.

At first, I played the flute, but I was bored to practice it.

One day, while I was in the orchestra room, I heard an oboe for the very first time.

I was completely blown away by it, and decided to change my instrument to the oboe.

I have many interesting memories of playing it.

I hope, I can keep playing the oboe for the rest of my life.

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My Musical Instrument

I have practiced anthe Oboe since 2011.

I participated in an amateur orchestra just after joining my company.

At first, I played the flute, but I was too bored to practice it.

One day, while I was in the orchestra room, I heard an oboe for the very first time.

I was completely blown away by it, and decided to change my instrument to the oboe.

I have many interesting memories of playing it.

I hope, I can keep playing the oboe for the rest of my life.

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My Musical Instrument


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I have practiced an Oboe since 2011.


I have practiced anthe Oboe since 2011.

I participated in an amateur orchestra just after joining my company.


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At first, I played the flute, but I was bored to practice it.


At first, I played the flute, but I was too bored to practice it.

One day, while I was in the orchestra room, I heard an oboe for the very first time.


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I was completely blown away by it, and decided to change my instrument to the oboe.


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I have many interesting memories of playing it.


I have many interesting memories of playing it.

I hope, I can keep playing the oboe for the rest of my life.


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