April 18, 2025
My Middle School Life
The middle school I used to study at is in my hometown, which is about two kilometers from my village.
When I was in elementary school, I didn’t need to stay at school because there was not much schoolwork, and the school was right behind my village.
However, in middle school, almost all of us were required to live on the campus, except for a few students who lived in the town.
At the very beginning of my middle school time, the students in my class didn’t know each other as all of us came from different villages.
Living conditions at school back then were really tough. There was no electricity in the school, nor was there hot water in each dormitory.
On the eastern side of the campus, there was a big pond. We went there to wash our faces every morning. If you wanted to get hot water, you had to go to the canteen in the back corner of the campus.
In winter, we had to find a brick to break the ice in the pond. As a result, every morning we went to our classroom with many pieces of ice in our hair.
Since we went to the classroom very early, it was still dark inside and outside the room, so we tried to light the vapor lamp-a kind of lamp consuming kerosene.
Our food was steamed buns made of sweet potato flour, and the soup made with water, salt and greens. We ate such food for a full three years.
Our dormitory was also shabby. There were even two holes in its back wall. Some students liked to make jokes by saying “please hold your blanket tightly, so that it won't be blown away” every night.
Time flies! Although it was already decades ago, the tough middle school life still left me with a lot of beautiful memories.
My life in Middle School Life
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The middle school I used to study at is in my hometown, which is about two kilometers from my village.
When I was in elementary school, I didn’t need to stay at school because there was not much schoolwork, and the school was right behind my village.
However, in middle school, almost all of us were required to live on the campus, except for a few students who lived in the town.
Ats the very beginning of my middle school time, the students in my class didn’t know each other as all of us canew school year began, the students in my class weren't yet familiar with one another as we had all come from different villages.
Your sentence was 1000% understandable. I just thought I would re-work it a bit.
Living conditions at school back then were really trough.
sounds slightly more natural.
There was school had no electricity in the school, nor was there hot water in eachany dormitory.
On the eastern side of the campus, there was a big pond.
We went there to wash our faces every morning.
If you wanted to get hot water, you had to go to the canteen in the back corner of the campus.
In winter, we had to find a brick to break the ice in the pond.
As a result, every morning we went to our classroom with many pieces of ice in our hair.
Since we went to the classroom very early, it was still dark inside and outside the room, so we tried to light the vapor lamp-a kind of lamp consumingthat ran on kerosene.
Our food was steamed buns made of sweet potato flour, and thea soup made with water, salt and greens.
We ate such food for a full three years.
Our dormitory was also shabby.
There were even two holes in its back wall.
Some studentof the kids liked to make jokes byjoke and saying “please hold on to your blanket tightly, so that it won't be blown away” every night.
Although it was already decades ago, theat tough middle school life still left me with a lot of beautiful memories.
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Having to wash your face with ice water would definitely wake you up! Tough kids, you were!
April 18, 2025
Also, instead of "many pieces of ice in our hair". You could say "a bunch of pieces of ice in our hair".
April 18, 2025
Thank you very much.
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The middle school I used to study at is in my hometown, which is about two kilometers from my village. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I was in elementary school, I didn’t need to stay at school because there was not much schoolwork, and the school was right behind my village. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, in middle school, almost all of us were required to live on the campus, except for a few students who lived in the town. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At the very beginning of my middle school time, the students in my class didn’t know each other as all of us came from different villages. A Your sentence was 1000% understandable. I just thought I would re-work it a bit. |
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Living conditions at school back then were really tough. Living conditions at school back then were really sounds slightly more natural. |
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There was no electricity in the school, nor was there hot water in each dormitory. The |
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On the eastern side of the campus, there was a big pond. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We went there to wash our faces every morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you wanted to get hot water, you had to go to the canteen in the back corner of the campus. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In winter, we had to find a brick to break the ice in the pond. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As a result, every morning we went to our classroom with many pieces of ice in our hair. As a result, every morning we went to |
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Since we went to the classroom very early, it was still dark inside and outside the room, so we tried to light the vapor lamp-a kind of lamp consuming kerosene. Since we went to the classroom very early, it was still dark inside and outside the room, so we tried to light the vapor lamp-a kind of lamp |
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Our food was steamed buns made of sweet potato flour, and the soup made with water, salt and greens. Our food was steamed buns made of sweet potato flour, and |
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We ate such food for a full three years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Our dormitory was also shabby. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There were even two holes in its back wall. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some students liked to make jokes by saying “please hold your blanket tightly, so that it won't be blown away” every night. Some |
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Time flies! |
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Although it was already decades ago, the tough middle school life still left me with a lot of beautiful memories. Although it was already decades ago, th typo |
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